这篇study plan读下来显得有点空泛，建议内容方面再丰富一些。另外，注意变化句型句式。 So, when I was informed that school of Law in CAU in not available for international exchange students, I didn’t get regretful, instead, I became exciting for I will get an opportunity to learn knowledge in another field （这句话较为中式，建议换个方式来表达，如 I feel ex...
Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Car has had a greater effect on the society than airplane There is no denying that car, as one of the transports, brings us a lot of convenience and takes us to a new period in which people focus on the word “speed” along with airplane So the importance...
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