TPO24独立写作批改。Do you agree or disagree with the statement: One of the best way that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to kae a part-time job 小站教育批改意见：文章意思清楚，但表达有问题，建议多做阅读及写作训练，一是培养语感，二是借鉴范文的行文方式。整篇文章出现了很多的拼写错误及语法错误，在写完之后，一定要做检查以规避此类错误。...
Many graduatess （修改为graduates）nowadays confront a indecisive problem in how to select their job Considering the pressuure（拼写错误，修改为pressure) and high prequisite in appliance, students who still focus on their primary study are more likely to choose a major that their parents have been The reasons a...
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