Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? In 20 years from now on,students will not use printed books anymore.
学生原文：
Thoughprinted books are still the major form of textbooks, many attempts are nowtaking place to replace them with electronic versions. Whether or not thetraditional printed books will be eliminated in 20 years remains unknown.However, I hold that student will not use printed books anymore because e-bookshave so many advantages over printed books, as I am going to list a few follow.
Firstly, electronicbooks are easy to carry. Nowadays, schoolbags are used by students to carrytextbooks to and from school. However, these bags sometimes can be very heavy,especially for primary school students. They not only lack strength to carryheavy things, but also are likely to carry more books than needed with thembecause of their lack of organizing skills. I once heard a shocking report thatsome young students have schoolbags weigh over 10 kilograms. It is said that aschoolbag that is too heavy can be a burden to students and may even do harm totheir growing body. With the use of e-books, students can store thousands ofbooks in a small electronic device, thus free them from stuffed schoolbags.
Moreover,it's environmental-friendly to replace printed books with electronic ones. Printedbooks consume huge amount of paper, which is made out of trees. During the lifeof studying, an average student owns many books, as my textbooks used in highschool can be taller than me when pilled up. It's a huge waste, for these booksmostly become useless after graduation. While many are trying to recycle orreuse these books, I think using e-books as a substitution can solve thisproblem once and for all.
Inaddition, e-books are more accessible and editable. With a strong onlinedatabase, it's just a click-and-download to get whatever book you want.Students can easily get different versions of textbooks and materials. Asdifferent people have different way of understanding, students can filter thekey points, reorganize them and add notes, thus making their own version ofreview outline more easily. For college students, it'll also be a lot moreconvenient to get reference book online, for they can find a book with certainkeyword, author or publishing date with the help of a powerful search engine.
Inconclusion, I think people will choose the electronic form of books to protectthe environment and make easier the students' life and studying.
小站教育老师批改：
Though printed books are still the[a] major form of textbooks[textbook就是纸质版的书，和printed books是一个意思], many attempts are now taking place to replace[many attempts are now taken to replace] them with electronic versions. Whether or not the[去掉] traditional printed books will be eliminated in 20 years remains unknown. However, I hold {the view/opinion} that student will not use printed books anymore because e-books have so many advantages over printed books, as I am going to list a few follow.
Firstly, electronic books are easy to carry. Nowadays, schoolbags are used by students to carry textbooks to and from school[可以去掉]. However, these bags sometimes can be very heavy, especially for primary school students. They not only lack strength to carry heavy things, but also are likely to carry more books than needed with them because of their lack of organizing skills. I once heard a shocking report that some young students have schoolbags weigh over 10 kilograms. It is said that a schoolbag that is too heavy can be a burden to students and may even do harm to their growing body. With the use of e-books, students can store thousands of books in a small electronic device, thus free[freeing] them from stuffed schoolbags.
Moreover,it's environmental-friendly to replace printed books with electronic ones. Printedbooks consume huge amount of paper, which is made out of trees. During the life of studying[表述有点Chinglish], an average student owns many books, as my textbooks used in highschool can be taller than me when pilled up. It's a huge waste, for these books mostly become useless after graduation. While many are trying to recycle or reuse these books, I think using e-books as a substitution can solve this problem once and for all【可是旧书回收或再利用也是一个很好的方法啊】.
Inaddition, e-books are more accessible and editable. With a strong onlinedatabase, it's just a click-and-download[这个词比较少见] to get whatever book you want.Students can easily get different versions of textbooks and materials. As different people have different way[ways] of understanding, students can filter the key points, reorganize them and add notes[逻辑有点牵强，在电子文本上做标记跟不同的人有不同的理解方式有因果关系吗?或者是表达的不够清楚], thus making their own version of review outline more easily. For college students, it'll also be a lot more convenient to get reference book online, for they can find a book with certain keyword[keywords], author or publishing date with the help of a powerful search engine.
In conclusion, I think people will choose the electronic form of books to protect the environment and make easier the students' life and studying.[结尾可以进一步充实]
小站教育老师评语：
预估分数：3.5+
结构清晰合理，写作思路非常明确
语言表达能够达意，但是在选词，造句方面还可以进一步提升，使文章更加地道
