总体来说,文章结构及思路较为明确,后半部分的Lab等经历,建议从专业角度及广度上做一个平衡,并注意详略结合。另外,就是一些细节的处理还需要进一步加强。My favorite toy in childhood was a kit for circuits which looked very similar to the popular toy, Snap Circuits Extreme, sold in America nowadays I still remember that the first time I found that circuits kit in the store, I...