First, the passage indicates that theAustens had promised to show a portrait of Jane to public in 1882. However, thelecturer points out that when they declared that, it was 70 years after Jane'sdeath. Those relatives are not possible to have seen Jane in flesh let along [alone] torecognize her.
Second, that the portrait looks alike [like] witha sketch of adult Jane is also questionable according to the lecturer. Becausethe Austens are a large family with hundreds of offsprings. It can be someoneelse's portrait. As a matter of fact, it looks pretty much similar to one of Jane's distant nieces, Mary.
Third, the lecturer is against the opinionthat the painting style links to a private portrait painter who can be worked for the Austens when Jane was a teenager as well. It's untenable to judge merelyfrom the style. Actually, evidence has been found that the canvas which theportrait was on was original from a famous craftsman. And he had not even begunto sell canvas until Jane was 27 years old.
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表述方面，衔接和转折用得不错，但叙述点没有多大的说服力。
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