There is no reason to be impolite (rude) to another person.
学生原文：
"It was the best of times; it was the worst of times", said by Charles Dickens in the beginning of 'A Tale of Two Cities'. Apparently, we benefited a lot from the drastically developing society and do seize every possible opportunity to promote our life qualities in such a blossom. Thus, we kind of omit our intrinsic development. In this way, we tend to behave more impolitely than we did in the past, while modern society is yearning for more civil behaviors. However, from my perspective, there is no reason to be impolite to another person.
Initially, we ought to understand each other since we are not raised by the same way. According to the survey made by China Daily, in 86 percent of cases, the very first reaction people tend to have when receiving impoliteness is serving the corresponding people with the same sauce. However, the philosophy of being impolite to others anchors on the perceptionthat we are living in various circumstances, receiving different educations, and experiencing diverse cultures. Simply stated, sometimes, when people may not intentionally be rude to you, you just firmly believe that they intended to do so and want so-called revenge for those impolitenesses. Hence, a vicious circle emerged. Even worse, people gradually embrace the impolite way for interpersonal interactions. Therefore, it is the high time that we should begin to understand others and abandon impoliteness.
Plus, being rude is least likely to solve problems in modern society. Take my personal experience as a typical example. Last year, I was working in a local company as a project-planner. Since it was the first job that I took, I strived to make every single detail in the project I planned perfect. However, my boss obviously did not appreciate my project, because she humiliated my in front of other employees. Instead of compromising, I quitted that job, for she is like a tyrant and I did not accept impoliteness. Soon after my quitting that job, I found a new job which was way better than the prior one with high salary and polite boss. Thus, being rude, by no means, could solve problem in such civilized society.
Admittedly, being impolite may be necessary in some fixed circumstances, like someone is trying to rob you or etc. However, by and large, we should be polite to others if we want others treat us the same way. Based on those discussions mentioned above, I think, there is no reason to be impolite to another person, for being rude is useless and not humane.
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"It was the best of times; it was the worst of times", said by Charles Dickens in the beginning of 'A Tale of Two Cities'.[这个引用很到位]Apparently, we benefited [用一般现在时比较合适啊]a lot from the drastically developing society and do seize every possible opportunity to promote our life qualities in such a blossom. Thus, we kind of omit our intrinsic development. In this way, we tend to behave more impolitely than we did in the past, while modern society is yearning for more civil behaviors. However, from my perspective, there is no reason to be impolite to another person.
Initially, we ought to understand each other since we are not raised by[in] the same way. According to the survey made by China Daily, in 86 percent of cases, the very first reaction people tend to have when receiving impoliteness is serving the corresponding people with the same sauce. However, the philosophy of being impolite to others anchors on the perceptionthat we are living in various circumstances, receiving different educations, and experiencing diverse cultures. Simply stated,[这个也不错] sometimes, when people may not intentionally be rude to you, you just firmly believe that they intended to do so and want so-called revenge for those impolitenesses. Hence, a vicious circle emerged. Even worse, people gradually embrace the impolite way for interpersonal interactions. Therefore, it is the high time that we should begin to understand others and abandon impoliteness.
Plus, being rude is least likely to solve problems in modern society. Take my personal experience as a typical example. Last year, I was working in a local company as a project-planner. Since it was the first job that I took, I strived to make every single detail in the project I planned perfect. However, my boss obviously did not appreciate my project, because she humiliated my in front of other employees. Instead of compromising, I quitted that job, for she is like a tyrant and I did not accept impoliteness. Soon after my quitting that job, I found a new job which was way better than the prior one with[a] high salary and polite boss. Thus, being rude, by no means, could solve problem[用复数] in such [a]civilized society.
Admittedly, being impolite may be necessary in some fixed circumstances, like someone is trying to rob you or etc. However, by and large, we should be polite to others if we want others [to]treat us the same way. Based on those discussions mentioned above, I think, there is no reason to be impolite to another person, for being rude is useless and not humane.
预估分数：4.6
语法错误有出现，但是不多，你的基本功是很不错的，尤其是以dickens的语言开头。很不错。自己的论证的时候再多用一些比较高级的词汇会更好一些，加油。
