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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teaching was a harder job in the past than it is today.
Living in a world changing at a bewildering speed, individuals, teachers included, are all trying to keep up with it. Undisputedly, this rapid change, especially those concerning technology, has extremely important implication for our education, rendering teaching easier compared to the past. In the old days, without the assistance of modern technology, teaching faced with more challenges that can be easily grappled with today.
On account of more evenly distributed educational resources and increasing number of qualified educators, classes can be relatively small and personal these days, allowing for a discussion-based teaching methodology. The small size and discuss-oriented format fuel each student to be actively involved in the teaching process. Thus teachers can get feedback from the class without delay. On the contrary, due to the limited resources, seventy around students often squeezed within one classroom. Under such condition, students are easily distracted and hence it is difficult for a teacher to take control of the whole class. Too often a teacher has to leave the teaching suspended to maintain the classroom discipline. In light of this, small class teaching makes it easier for teachers to carry out teaching activities.
Apart from smaller class size, multimedia devices also help making teaching practice more easily to implement. Technology has completely revolutionized traditional liner and text-based learning. With easy access to numerous online database, for instance, teachers no longer need to struggle to mimic the primitive shouts of Ancient Egyptian during an anthropology class. Simply by clicking the mouse, various original sounds would play, lending students the most direct and fresh experience. In another case, multimedia teaching even frees teachers from the cramped classroom. Via videoconference, the educator can establish connections with all the student. Even if he is sick or on business, he can still supervise them. Obviously, teachers nowadays are equipped with more helpful tools and enjoy more freedom.
Additionally, students become more acceptive in general these days, thereby understanding the knowledge imparted more quickly and deeply. The new generation grow up in a society of information explosion, where various sorts of knowledge are not merely accessible to several experts. Plus the proliferation of museums, educational programs, and digitalized books, students are absorbing knowledge anywhere and everywhere. Imaginably, teachers would be more relaxed to stay with such "understanding" students. However, in the past, students have comparatively few ways to acquire extra knowledge. They may never hear of anything about the subject the teacher is talking about so that they may become passive and slow in learning. In view of this, teachers have to put greater effort in explaining even a single concept.
In conclusion, considering the great changes of the technologically advanced society, I reinforce my standpoint that teaching is more of an easy practice these days.
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Living in a world changing at a bewildering speed, individuals, teachers included, are all trying to keep up with it. Undisputedly, this rapid change, especially those concerning technology, has extremely important implication for our education, rendering teaching easier compared to the past. In the old days, without the assistance of modern technology, teaching faced with more challenges that can be easily grappled with today.
On account of more evenly distributed educational resources and increasing number of qualified educators, classes can be relatively small and personal these days, allowing for a discussion-based teaching methodology. The small size and discuss-oriented format fuel each student to be actively involved in the teaching process. Thus teachers can get feedback from the class without delay. On the contrary, due to the limited resources, seventy around students often squeezed within one classroom. Under such condition, students are easily distracted and hence it is difficult for a teacher to take control of the whole class. Too often a teacher has to leave the teaching suspended to maintain the classroom discipline. In light of this, small class teaching makes it easier for teachers to carry out teaching activities.[这一段的对比论证不错]
Apart from smaller class size, multimedia devices also help making teaching practice more easily to implement[help making 的表达有点怪]. Technology has completely revolutionized traditional liner and text-based learning. With easy access to numerous online database, for instance, teachers no longer need to struggle to mimic the primitive shouts of Ancient Egyptian during an anthropology class. Simply by clicking the mouse, various original sounds would play, lending students the most direct and fresh experience. In another case, multimedia teaching even frees teachers from the cramped classroom. Via videoconference, the educator can establish connections with all the student. Even if he is sick or on business, he can still supervise them. Obviously, teachers nowadays are equipped with more helpful tools and enjoy more freedom.
Additionally, students become more acceptive in general these days, thereby understanding the knowledge imparted more quickly and deeply. The new generation grow up in a society of information explosion, where various sorts of knowledge are not merely accessible to several experts. Plus the proliferation of museums, educational programs, and digitalized books, students are absorbing knowledge anywhere and everywhere. Imaginably, teachers would be more relaxed to stay with such "understanding" students. However, in the past, students have comparatively few ways to acquire extra knowledge. They may never hear of anything about the subject the teacher is talking about so that they may become passive and slow in learning. In view of this, teachers have to put greater effort in explaining even a single concept.
In conclusion, considering the great changes of the technologically advanced society, I reinforce my standpoint that teaching is more of an easy practice these days.
文章结构清晰，逻辑严谨，语言流利，用词丰富，是一篇很不错的好作文。
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Level: GOOD (4.0–5.0)
ADVICE FOR IMPROVEMENT OF INTERGRATED TASK
>> Continue to improve your ability to relate and convey information from two or more sources. For example, practice analyzing reading passages in English.
>> Read two articles or chapters on the same topic or issue, write a summary of each, and then explain the ways they are similar and the ways they are different.
>> Practice combining listening and reading by searching for readings related to talks and lectures with teacher or a friend.
ADVICE FOR IMPROVEMENT OF INDEPENDENT TASK
>> Continue to improve your ability to express opinions by studying the ways that published writers express their opinions.
>> Read articles and essays written by professional writers that express opinions about an issue (for example, a social, environmental or educational issue).
>> Identify the writer’s opinion or opinions.
>> Notice how the writer addresses possible objections to the opinions, if the writer discusses these.
>>尽量多阅读范文，模仿好的文章中作者阐述论证观点的方式。
>>多阅读不同类型话题的文章，积累专业作家针对不同话题的观点内容。
>>可以多引用别人的观点内容。
>>阅读范文过程中，注意作者如何反向论证观点。
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