Some people think the high sales of products reflect the power of advertising instad of the consumers' demand. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Establishing advertisements for promoting the sales volumn, or maintaining brand image has become an building block of general strategies to boost enterprises' revenue. Recently, an interesting issue focused on the effect of advertisements - i.e. whether the great hits of a product is rooted in the well-designed advertisement activities.
One argument associated with this issue favors the positive effect of advertising in boosting the sales of products. To some extent, advertisements serving as mass media might, on one side, help consumers better acquire the fancy characteristics of target products, or discount message. On the other hand, it really does advertiser a favor in increasing the chance of exposing publishers's profound concept, mostly about their company culture to their latent consumers. Generally, most of advertisements you touched are not published directly by the advertisers. Instead, ads agency undertakes the job and offers professional services to advertisers, aiming to help them design well-rounded advertising plan, make fancinating videos or words to beauty client's products. Actually, they even reckon the distribution of target consumers, then adapt particular plan to maximum advertisers' profit with limited budget. As a result of it, more and more people are reached through the distribution capacity of mass media, especially the Internet. Generally, many of them might have the very requirement for the companion items related with the exposed ads, or they might inpulsively purchase the products because of the attractive cheap price or discount message.
However, another argument turns opposite to the beforementioned point - i.e. it hightlights the consumers' function in generating the sale volumn of a product. From their view point, the decision right is firmly owned by consumers themselves. Typically, among the approaches to cop with various ads, one of them is particularly evident - i.e. people have deep trust in recommendations from their friends. It is quiet often seen in our daily life. Also, it is a practical way to facilitate the social interaction with friends. Furthermore, consumers could still make a wise decision based on their own requirements, though having paid much attention to the advertising message. It is noted that the constraince of disposable incoming could also influence the number of possible affordable products. In particular, this stituation can frequently happend to students like us without any revenue.
Last but not the least, advertising can do both consumers and advertisers a favor. However, overwhelming established advertisements, due to the heavy competitive pressure, have produced. Most of them are frequently exposed to us every second, which seriously influences the quality of our life. In my opinion, advertiser should pay more attention to improving the quality of their advertising content, construction, of course, the publishing time and oriented object. Or consumers could possibly turn to their competitive company's product, or even worse case, they just chooses to omit them.
One argument associated with this issue favors the positive effect of advertising in boosting the sales of products. To some extent, advertisements serving as mass media might, on one side, help consumers better acquire the fancy characteristics of target products, or discount message. On the other hand, it really does advertiser a favor in increasing the chance of exposing publishers's profound concept, mostly about their company culture to their latent consumers. Generally, most of advertisements you touched are not published directly by the advertisers. Instead, ads agency undertakes the job and offers professional services to advertisers, aiming to help them design well-rounded advertising plan, make fancinating videos or words to beauty client's products. Actually, they even reckon the distribution of target consumers, then adapt particular plan to maximum advertisers' profit with limited budget. As a result of it, more and more people are reached through the distribution capacity of mass media, especially the Internet. Generally, many of them might have the very requirement for the companion items related with the exposed ads, or they might inpulsively purchase the products because of the attractive cheap price or discount message.
However, another argument turns opposite to the beforementioned point - i.e. it hightlights the consumers' function in generating the sale volumn of a product. From their view point, the decision right is firmly owned by consumers themselves. Typically, among the approaches to cop with various ads, one of them is particularly evident - i.e. people have deep trust in recommendations from their friends. It is quiet often seen in our daily life. Also, it is a practical way to facilitate the social interaction with friends. Furthermore, consumers could still make a wise decision based on their own requirements, though having paid much attention to the advertising message. It is noted that the constraince of disposable incoming could also influence the number of possible affordable products. In particular, this stituation can frequently happend to students like us without any revenue.
Last but not the least, advertising can do both consumers and advertisers a favor. However, overwhelming established advertisements, due to the heavy competitive pressure, have produced. Most of them are frequently exposed to us every second, which seriously influences the quality of our life. In my opinion, advertiser should pay more attention to improving the quality of their advertising content, construction, of course, the publishing time and oriented object. Or consumers could possibly turn to their competitive company's product, or even worse case, they just chooses to omit them.
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Some people think the high sales of products reflect the power of advertising instad of the consumers' demand. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Establishing advertisements for promoting the sales volumn, or maintaining brand image has become an building block of general strategies to boost enterprises' revenue（背景介绍）. Recently, an interesting issue focused （focusing）on the effect of advertisements - i.e. （that）whether the great hits of a product is rooted in the well-designed advertisement activities.（改写题目）那么你自己的观点呢（或者对正文部分内容的简介）？即你到底是同意还是不同意？
背景介绍——改写题目——自己的观点，这三个层次可以使第一段内容更充实。
One argument associated with this issue favors the positive effect of advertising in boosting the sales of products. To some extent, advertisements serving as mass media might, on one side, （on the one hand......on the other hand)help consumers better acquire the fancy characteristics of target products, or discount message. On the other hand, it really does advertiser a favor in increasing the chance of exposing publishers's profound concept, mostly about their company culture to their latent consumers. Generally, most of advertisements you touched (时态，一般现在时就行）are not published directly by the advertisers. Instead, ads agency undertakes the job and offers professional services to advertisers, aiming to help them design well-rounded advertising plan, make fancinating videos or words to beauty client's products. Actually, they even reckon the distribution of target consumers, then adapt particular plan to maximum advertisers' profit with limited budget. As a result of it, more and more people are reached through the distribution capacity of mass media, especially the Internet. Generally, many of them might have the very requirement for the companion items related with the exposed ads, or they might inpulsively purchase the products because of the attractive cheap price or discount message.
However, another argument turns opposite to the beforementioned point - i.e.（这样的写法是不规范的） it hightlights the consumers' function in generating the sale volumn of a product. From their view point, the decision right is firmly owned by consumers themselves. Typically, among the approaches to cop （cope)with various ads, one of them is particularly evident - i.e. (同样的问题）people have deep trust in recommendations from their friends. It is quiet （quite）often seen in our daily life. Also, it is a practical way to facilitate the social interaction with friends. Furthermore, consumers could still make a wise decision based on their own requirements, though having paid much attention to the advertising message. It is noted that the constraince of disposable incoming could also influence the number of possible affordable products. In particular, this stituation can frequently happend to students like us without any revenue.
Last but not the least, advertising can do both consumers and advertisers a favor. However, overwhelming established advertisements, due to the heavy competitive pressure, have produced. Most of them are frequently exposed to us every second, which seriously influences the quality of our life. In my opinion, advertiser should pay more attention to improving the quality of their advertising content, construction, of course, the publishing time and oriented object. Or consumers could possibly turn to their competitive company's product, or even worse case, they just chooses to omit them.（对于题目问题的回答呢？产品的高销售是取决于广告还是个人的需要啊？）
估分：6；
评价：最大的问题就是观点不切题，有点偏题。最好在开头就点出你自己的观点，这样写的时候就不会偏了。
这种题目论述结构一般采取欲扬先抑的手法，首先部分肯定另一方观点的合理性，然后再着重阐述自己的观点。主次要分明，这篇文章你的重点不够突出。
Establishing advertisements for promoting the sales volumn, or maintaining brand image has become an building block of general strategies to boost enterprises' revenue（背景介绍）. Recently, an interesting issue focused （focusing）on the effect of advertisements - i.e. （that）whether the great hits of a product is rooted in the well-designed advertisement activities.（改写题目）那么你自己的观点呢（或者对正文部分内容的简介）？即你到底是同意还是不同意？
背景介绍——改写题目——自己的观点，这三个层次可以使第一段内容更充实。
One argument associated with this issue favors the positive effect of advertising in boosting the sales of products. To some extent, advertisements serving as mass media might, on one side, （on the one hand......on the other hand)help consumers better acquire the fancy characteristics of target products, or discount message. On the other hand, it really does advertiser a favor in increasing the chance of exposing publishers's profound concept, mostly about their company culture to their latent consumers. Generally, most of advertisements you touched (时态，一般现在时就行）are not published directly by the advertisers. Instead, ads agency undertakes the job and offers professional services to advertisers, aiming to help them design well-rounded advertising plan, make fancinating videos or words to beauty client's products. Actually, they even reckon the distribution of target consumers, then adapt particular plan to maximum advertisers' profit with limited budget. As a result of it, more and more people are reached through the distribution capacity of mass media, especially the Internet. Generally, many of them might have the very requirement for the companion items related with the exposed ads, or they might inpulsively purchase the products because of the attractive cheap price or discount message.
However, another argument turns opposite to the beforementioned point - i.e.（这样的写法是不规范的） it hightlights the consumers' function in generating the sale volumn of a product. From their view point, the decision right is firmly owned by consumers themselves. Typically, among the approaches to cop （cope)with various ads, one of them is particularly evident - i.e. (同样的问题）people have deep trust in recommendations from their friends. It is quiet （quite）often seen in our daily life. Also, it is a practical way to facilitate the social interaction with friends. Furthermore, consumers could still make a wise decision based on their own requirements, though having paid much attention to the advertising message. It is noted that the constraince of disposable incoming could also influence the number of possible affordable products. In particular, this stituation can frequently happend to students like us without any revenue.
Last but not the least, advertising can do both consumers and advertisers a favor. However, overwhelming established advertisements, due to the heavy competitive pressure, have produced. Most of them are frequently exposed to us every second, which seriously influences the quality of our life. In my opinion, advertiser should pay more attention to improving the quality of their advertising content, construction, of course, the publishing time and oriented object. Or consumers could possibly turn to their competitive company's product, or even worse case, they just chooses to omit them.（对于题目问题的回答呢？产品的高销售是取决于广告还是个人的需要啊？）
估分：6；
评价：最大的问题就是观点不切题，有点偏题。最好在开头就点出你自己的观点，这样写的时候就不会偏了。
这种题目论述结构一般采取欲扬先抑的手法，首先部分肯定另一方观点的合理性，然后再着重阐述自己的观点。主次要分明，这篇文章你的重点不够突出。
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