TPO32综合写作批改。In thelistening, the professor argues that the statements which in the readingpassage are have problems, after that, she gives several reasons to demonstrateher opinion 好几次都需要添加空格。这篇文章，通篇读下来语法有较多问题，一定要注意时态，人称等。多处未使用空格。在综合写作中要求学生要全面的把握阅读和听力中的观点，抓住对比，对立观点，尽可能多的充实细节语句，撰写的文章要忠实于原文。这篇文章基本掌握了...
Many graduatess （修改为graduates）nowadays confront a indecisive problem in how to select their job Considering the pressuure（拼写错误，修改为pressure) and high prequisite in appliance, students who still focus on their primary study are more likely to choose a major that their parents have been The reasons a...
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