Do you agree or disgree with the statement:Schools need to spend lots of money on social activities to attract good students.
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With the development of modern education, students are becoming increasingly perplexed about which university to choose. There comes a controversy regarding whether schools should spend lots of money on social activities in order to attract good students or not. People have various ideas. Some believe that they should, but others contend not. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter.
Admittedly, activities are important to students in some aspects, such as they bring them lots of happiness and take them away from the stress in study. However, those are not decisive factors that really influence students' decisions. Students can do those social activities out of their schools, and they can choose many interesting classes to supersede the joy from social activities. Moreover, there are many vital factors of choosing a satisfied university, which cannot be ignore.
First and foremost, the quality of classes and professors is very essential for all the students, which requires lots of money to improve. Students go to their dream universities mainly for studying well, because they need to gain enough professional knowledge for their future uses. Take myself as an example. When I was in my junior high school, I thought about transferring to another high school, because the school could not satisfied my requirements. Each time I asked my math teacher about some questions on the book I studied by myself, which is out of her teaching list, she never gave me the answer. She always told me that she did not know the answer either, and all the math teachers in school could not always solve my problems. I was so done with the school, so when I successfully transferred to the new school, which has many talented and professional teachers, I was extremely cheerful. Most of students valued the expertise as much as I do, so the quality of classes and professors is very crucial.
In addition, the environment of the campus is also of high importance, which needs a large amount of money to build. The environment includes the teaching buildings, the dormitories, the cafeterias, and so on. Good circumstance provides students with a great place to study and to spend their daily lives happily. My sister hates her school very much, so she always complains about her school to me. The dormitory is so unhygienic, and you can even see bugs move back and forth sometimes. The cafeteria is so bad that she always spends money out of school on dinner, which is very expensive and also wastes a lot of time to go outside. On the contrary, the environment of my school is fantastic, which makes my sister envy me a lot. Our dormitories are not only very capacious, but also of great sanitation. What is more, the dishes in our cafeteria are tasty and cheap. I spend less than ten dollars satiate my needs. Thus, students really care about the environment of their universities.
To sum up, compared to the importance of great quality of professors and classes, and the conditions of universities, the funding on social activities is truly secondary.
Admittedly, activities are important to students in some aspects, such as they bring them lots of happiness and take them away from the stress in study. However, those are not decisive factors that really influence students' decisions. Students can do those social activities out of their schools, and they can choose many interesting classes to supersede the joy from social activities. Moreover, there are many vital factors of choosing a satisfied university, which cannot be ignore.
First and foremost, the quality of classes and professors is very essential for all the students, which requires lots of money to improve. Students go to their dream universities mainly for studying well, because they need to gain enough professional knowledge for their future uses. Take myself as an example. When I was in my junior high school, I thought about transferring to another high school, because the school could not satisfied my requirements. Each time I asked my math teacher about some questions on the book I studied by myself, which is out of her teaching list, she never gave me the answer. She always told me that she did not know the answer either, and all the math teachers in school could not always solve my problems. I was so done with the school, so when I successfully transferred to the new school, which has many talented and professional teachers, I was extremely cheerful. Most of students valued the expertise as much as I do, so the quality of classes and professors is very crucial.
In addition, the environment of the campus is also of high importance, which needs a large amount of money to build. The environment includes the teaching buildings, the dormitories, the cafeterias, and so on. Good circumstance provides students with a great place to study and to spend their daily lives happily. My sister hates her school very much, so she always complains about her school to me. The dormitory is so unhygienic, and you can even see bugs move back and forth sometimes. The cafeteria is so bad that she always spends money out of school on dinner, which is very expensive and also wastes a lot of time to go outside. On the contrary, the environment of my school is fantastic, which makes my sister envy me a lot. Our dormitories are not only very capacious, but also of great sanitation. What is more, the dishes in our cafeteria are tasty and cheap. I spend less than ten dollars satiate my needs. Thus, students really care about the environment of their universities.
To sum up, compared to the importance of great quality of professors and classes, and the conditions of universities, the funding on social activities is truly secondary.
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With the development of modern education, students are becoming increasingly perplexed about which university to choose. There comes a controversy regarding whether schools should spend lots of money on social activities in order to attract good students or not. People have various ideas. Some believe that they should, but others contend not. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter.【开头中规中矩，无可挑剔】
Admittedly, activities are important to students in some aspects, such as【such as 一般不跟句子】 they bring them lots of happiness and take them away from the stress in study. However, those are not decisive factors that really influence students' decisions. Students can do those social activities out of their schools, and they can choose many interesting classes to supersede the joy from social activities. Moreover, there are many vital factors of choosing a satisfied university, which cannot be ignore【ignored】.
First and foremost, the quality of classes and professors is very essential for all the students, which requires lots of money to improve. Students go to their dream universities mainly for studying well, because they need to gain enough professional knowledge for their future uses. Take myself as an example. When I was in my junior high school, I thought about transferring to another high school, because the school could not satisfied my requirements. Each time I asked my math teacher about some questions on the book I studied by myself, which is【was】 out of her teaching list, she never gave me the answer. She always told me that she did not know the answer either, and all the math teachers in school could not always solve my problems. I was so done with the school, so when I successfully transferred to the new school, which has many talented and professional teachers, I was extremely cheerful. Most of students valued the expertise as much as I do, so the quality of classes and professors is very crucial.【以自身为例，比较有说服力】
In addition, the environment of the campus is also of high importance, which needs a large amount of money to build. The environment includes the teaching buildings, the dormitories, the cafeterias, and so on. Good circumstance provides students with a great place to study and to spend their daily lives happily. My sister hates her school very much, so she always complains about her school to me. The dormitory is so unhygienic, and you can even see bugs move back and forth sometimes. The cafeteria is so bad that she always spends money out of school on dinner, which is very expensive and also wastes a lot of time to go outside. On the contrary, the environment of my school is fantastic, which makes my sister envy me a lot. Our dormitories are not only very capacious, but also of great sanitation. What is more, the dishes in our cafeteria are tasty and cheap. I spend less than ten dollars satiate my needs. Thus, students really care about the environment of their universities.【相对来说，例子花的篇幅比较多，注意多样化的论证方法】
To sum up, compared to the importance of great quality of professors and classes, and the conditions of universities, the funding on social activities is truly secondary.【言简意赅，处理得不错】
With the development of modern education, students are becoming increasingly perplexed about which university to choose. There comes a controversy regarding whether schools should spend lots of money on social activities in order to attract good students or not. People have various ideas. Some believe that they should, but others contend not. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter.【开头中规中矩，无可挑剔】
Admittedly, activities are important to students in some aspects, such as【such as 一般不跟句子】 they bring them lots of happiness and take them away from the stress in study. However, those are not decisive factors that really influence students' decisions. Students can do those social activities out of their schools, and they can choose many interesting classes to supersede the joy from social activities. Moreover, there are many vital factors of choosing a satisfied university, which cannot be ignore【ignored】.
First and foremost, the quality of classes and professors is very essential for all the students, which requires lots of money to improve. Students go to their dream universities mainly for studying well, because they need to gain enough professional knowledge for their future uses. Take myself as an example. When I was in my junior high school, I thought about transferring to another high school, because the school could not satisfied my requirements. Each time I asked my math teacher about some questions on the book I studied by myself, which is【was】 out of her teaching list, she never gave me the answer. She always told me that she did not know the answer either, and all the math teachers in school could not always solve my problems. I was so done with the school, so when I successfully transferred to the new school, which has many talented and professional teachers, I was extremely cheerful. Most of students valued the expertise as much as I do, so the quality of classes and professors is very crucial.【以自身为例，比较有说服力】
In addition, the environment of the campus is also of high importance, which needs a large amount of money to build. The environment includes the teaching buildings, the dormitories, the cafeterias, and so on. Good circumstance provides students with a great place to study and to spend their daily lives happily. My sister hates her school very much, so she always complains about her school to me. The dormitory is so unhygienic, and you can even see bugs move back and forth sometimes. The cafeteria is so bad that she always spends money out of school on dinner, which is very expensive and also wastes a lot of time to go outside. On the contrary, the environment of my school is fantastic, which makes my sister envy me a lot. Our dormitories are not only very capacious, but also of great sanitation. What is more, the dishes in our cafeteria are tasty and cheap. I spend less than ten dollars satiate my needs. Thus, students really care about the environment of their universities.【相对来说，例子花的篇幅比较多，注意多样化的论证方法】
To sum up, compared to the importance of great quality of professors and classes, and the conditions of universities, the funding on social activities is truly secondary.【言简意赅，处理得不错】
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