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托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析:change about your hometown

2020年03月17日14:05 来源:小站整理
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摘要:托福写作遭遇陌生话题缺乏思路是常见问题,容易影响考生发挥和心态。因此大家需要在备考中多接触各类作文话题了解写法思路,积累些高分范文经验提前做好准备。本文将带来托福写作难点话题的思路解析和高分范文赏析。(搜“小站托福”公众号,回复关键词“资讯”,掌握托福最新的考试资讯及留学信息。)

托福写作的题目类型很广涉及话题种类繁多,有些话题考生初看之下会有完全没思路不知道如何展开的困扰。为了避免大家直到考试当中才遭遇这种问题,下面小编就来分享托福写作各类难点题目的写作思路解析和高分满分范文,本期作文话题为:速食方式改变生活。

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托福写作难点话题一览

The most important thing you want to change about your hometown.

If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

写作思路展开结构分析

这个题目灵活度比较高,关键在于改变,尽量写积极正面,能够让家乡变得更好的角度。比如增加绿化,改善环境等等,因为一个好的环境会使人们更加快乐更加健康。从这类角度来展开思路明确符合主旋律写起来也会更顺手一些。

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本话题高分范文赏析

I was born in a small town named Hailin, located in the North-East of China. The most serious problems in my hometown are the backward ideas about a woman's place in the family, school, workplace, and society. These negative stereotypes hurt not only women, but all of society as well. If possible, I would change the attitudes of the people in my hometown so they would view men and women equally. Discrimination against women in my hometown begins before they are even born. Because people here believe that only a man can carry on the family line, every family wants to have at least one son. Each family is only supposed to have one child because of the overpopulation problem. This means that if a family can find out a fetus is female before it is born they might abort it. Or in other cases, people will have many female babies before they have a son, which only makes the population problem worse. If female babies were considered as important as male babies, then these two problems probably would not exist. Discrimination against girls continues as they go to school and work. The prevalent stereotype is that women are not as smart as men and we shouldn't waste time and money educating them. Families often insist that their daughters stay at home and help with housework while sending their sons to school. Girls are born every bit as smart as boys and equally deserve to reap the benefits of education. Many of the world's famous scientists and leaders are women, from Marie Curie to Margaret Thatcher. We need to eliminate the stereotype that women are less intelligent than men so that our community can benefit from the achievements that women are capable of making when armed with education. In fact, women need to be respected enough to hold professional and leadership jobs in our community. This would mean that in the classified section of newspapers, there would no longer be jobs for "men only." We will never know how many women could have done those jobs better than a man could have until the parents of every baby girl decide that their daughter is worth as much as their son. This is probably the most important thing that I want to change about my hometown.

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以上就是小编为大家带来的托福写作难点话题思路解析和高分范文分享,希望能够给各位同学提供一些参考,帮助大家拓展写作思路,为托福写作考试做好充分准备。

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