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免费托福口语批改:关于职业的话题

小站教育为各位考试提供免费在线批改服务,今天免费托福口语批改板块给各位考生带来的题目是:Which of the following jobs or careers do you think would be most rewarding? Universty professor,Environmental scientist.

学生回答:

In my opinon,the job of university professor is much more rewarding than that of environmental scientist.Firstly,like environmental scientists,university professors can choose projects to research in support of national fund.Secondly,university professors have winter and summer holidays to spend much more time with their families than environmental scientist.Thirdly,university professors have oppotunity to communicate with students.That's much more fun than environmental scientist.

Comment for Independent Task 1 or 2

Overall Score:22

评分标准:

1、Generalization:论述the job of university professor is more rewarding 的理由充分,且较具有层次感。

2、Delivery:无。

3、Language-Use:如何丰富句型。

例如第3个理由,可以改为:with the opportunities to communicate with students,university professors can have a more meanigful life

4、Topic Development:观点论证扩展有细节具体陈述。

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