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托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析:老师工资和学生表现挂钩

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摘要:托福写作的题目类型很广涉及话题种类繁多,有些话题考生初看之下会有完全没思路不知道如何展开的困扰。为了避免大家直到考试当中才遭遇这种问题,本文为大家整理了托福写作各类难点题目的写作思路解析和高分满分范文,本期作文话题为:老师工资和学生表现挂钩。

托福写作遭遇陌生话题缺乏思路是比较让人头疼的一件事,考试中如果遇到自己完全不知道怎么写的题目可能会严重影响大家的发挥和心态。因此,考生需要在写作备考中就开始多接触各类作文话题了解写法思路,多读一些高分范文提前进行铺垫。下面小编就为大家带来托福写作难点话题的思路解析和高分范文赏析。

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托福写作难点话题一览

Should teachers be paid according to how much their students learn?

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn. Give specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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写作思路展开结构分析

不能同意。乍看起来(at the first glance)很有道理。问题在于:教育不是商品。如何保证能够确切地衡量学生究竟学到了多少?学生学到多少,并不是老师一个人的事情,还要看学生自身的素质(quality);能力(capacity)等等。如果采取了这样的方式,就会出现老师迎合(cater to/ pander to/ play up to students' taste)学生而不是引导 (guide; lead)学生,违背了教育的原则。

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本话题高分范文赏析

People usually believe that teachers have the most important job in all of society. They raise our children to be forward-thinking, bright individuals. They ensure that children get along with each other, and learn to work together as a team. As such, being a teacher typically means a stable paycheck. However, when some people propose that teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn, I can hardly agree. First of all, students may not be interested in learning. When students are not interested in learning, the teacher can hardly be held responsible. The teacher can grade them harshly, keep them in after class, and discipline them severely, but the students will still not learn if they do not want to. If the teacher is trying his/her best to teach the students, and the information is presented clearly and succinctly, he/she can do no better job. Moreover, there is a limit on how much a child can learn. If a teacher was to be paid according to how much his/her students learned, there would be a certain point where he/she could teach them no more. I remember when I was in high school, there would be moments in the year when I didn't think I could fit any more information into my head. This was not my teacher's fault, and the point is that I just was not absorbing the material. I think many teachers would find this problem if they were paid by how much their students learnt. Most importantly, teachers should not be paid according to how much their students learn because some of the lessons that a student learns cannot be measured by a test. We cannot simply give children a test to discover how much they have learnt in a class. Tests rarely measure one's social skills, one's ability to communicate, or one's ability to integrate successfully into the world. However, it is the teachers who help students to manifest these qualities.

以上就是小编为大家带来的托福写作难点话题思路解析和高分范文分享,希望能够给各位同学提供一些参考,帮助大家拓展写作思路,为托福写作考试做好充分准备。

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