新托福写作素材有哪些?环境类素材整理
- 2017年08月21日13:59 来源:小站整理
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托福写作当中,我们准备的素材是可以直接应用到我们的作文当中去的。积累这些对大家的写作是很有帮助的。这里小编就为大家整理托福写作环境类素材,大家在托福备考的时候可以花一些时间来记一下哦。
托福独立写作素材:环境
在学习托福写作的过程中,随着对于写作本质的不断认识,同学们会逐渐认识并重视例证以及细节对于一篇好的独立写作的重要性。但是会发现很多同学在进行编辑例证的时候会缺乏思路,最主要的原因是因为学生们还没有长大,也就是说学生们对于很多常识性的知识缺乏了解。托福考试是针对非英语母语的考生的语言测试,会尽量避免因为文化差异而存在的不公平,但这并不能作为学生们写出恶俗的例子的借口。其实素材的积累也非常简单,但是因为学生们可能在备考的过程中没有太多时间和精力。因此敏敏老师在这里希望通过定期去发一些时事新闻,并且将素材应用到具体的论证段落中,去让学生们有机会去接触并积累一些当下热门并且新鲜的论证素材! (素材来源于一些很好的网站,如大家耳熟能详的NBC news,经济学人,NPR news等等)
上面的截图就是来自于NBC news的一篇报导的一部分
下面演示如何应用到环境类题目:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: the environmental problem is too complex and cannot be handled by individuals.
这是一道看似很具体其实又比较抽象的题目,具有一定的难度。我建议采用拆分的观点去进行展开,这时候有的同学会对于环境污染进行拆分,如水,空气,光,土壤,白色污染等。围绕这几个点进行展开。但个人并不建议采用这样的思路展开,因为很可能在展开的时候会缺乏细节的补充。这里进行对于individuals进行拆分。若中间段采取两个例证段加让步段的形式,可拆分为普通人和名人;若采取三个例证段落,可拆分为普通人,政客以及明星。下面就具体演示如何应用新闻中最新的素材去展开普通人这样的一个段落。
To begin with, the ordinary can play a role in precipitating the improvement of environmental quality.(论点) By participating in the environmental campaigns, the perilous environmental deterioration will experience an enormous modification owing to the constantly strengthened consciousness of preserving the environment for the common citizens who are willing to transform their conventional behaviors.(解释论点) The campaign happening on April 22 in 1970 can fully demonstrate the irreplaceable function of citizens in the process of environmental conservation.(印出例子) In that day, millions of people took to streets for 60s-style demonstrations and marches, attempting to call attention to hazardous pollution of America’s land, air and water, and ten thousand of campaigners flocked to the Washington Monument for a folk music concert. And the campaign that triggered the formation of Earth Day, in a long run, turns out to create huge impacts. For instance, the aggregation of emissions of six major air pollutants have dropped more than 60 percent since 1908. Apart from that, only about a third of American water was safe for swimming and fishing before the passage of the Clean Water Act in 1972, but today, that proportion has risen to about two-thirds. (描述具体例子细节)Accordingly, it is no difficult to explore the importance of ordinary people’s involvement in environmental protection.(得出结论)
以上就是小编为大家整理托福写作环境相关的素材,希望对大家备考托福写作有帮助。最后,小编预祝大家托福考试能取得理想的成绩。
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