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托福独立口语高频话题资深讲师批改分享:外太空旅行

2019年05月05日14:15 来源:小站整理
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摘要:托福独立口语中有很多高频热点话题,这些话题大家也许自己也练过,但因为缺乏权威批改,可能即使练了考生也还是没从中收获太过有价值的经验。本文将为大家分享托福独立口语高频话题的学生答案和资深讲师批改结果,帮助大家提升独立口语答题技巧。本文话题为:外太空旅行。

考生在备考独立口语时常会遇到的一个问题是缺乏专业靠谱的权威人士来为自己批改答案。大家可能练习了不少独立口语话题,但因为缺乏有效批改,就连自己也不知道练习到底有没有成效。下面小编就来为大家分享一些来自托福资深讲师针对独立口语高频话题学生答案的专业批改。

托福独立口语高频话题资深讲师批改分享:外太空旅行图1

本期托福独立口语高频话题

If you had the chance to travel to outer space, will you go or not? Give your specific reasons.

学生对此话题的表述答案

If I have a chance, I definietly will go to outer space. Because going to outer space has been one of my most primary goal of my life. Since I was a child, I would like to go to outer space. I have a dream to go to outer space. Besides, when I go to the outer space, I can see the views I can never see in the earth. For example, the burning sun, the siren moon, and shining sirius star. Finally, if I can go to the outer space. I definitely can find the true meaning of our life. Because the human are so small, to thsoe giant star. We have to do what we have to do. to burn ourselves, to devote ourselves to what we like, can we own a sucessful life.

托福独立口语高频话题资深讲师批改分享:外太空旅行图2

资深讲师批改意见

发音部分需注意的几个词(Pronunciation)

1 space

2 views

语法方面出现的错误(Grammar)

1 have a chance——had the chance

2 in the earth——on the earth

3 since I was child, I would like——since childhood, I have wanted

4 the outer space——outer space

表达部分存在的问题(Expression)

1 definietly will go——will definitely go

2 most primary——the primary

3 for example——such as

4 so small to——so small, compared to

托福独立口语高频话题资深讲师批改分享:外太空旅行图3

此高频话题高分口语模板分享

If I had the chance, I will definitely go to outer space, because it has been my primary goal in my life. Since childhood, I have wanted to go to outer space. If I go to outer space, I can see the views that I could never see on earth, such as the burning sun, the sirens moon, and the shinning sirius star. Finally, if I go to outer space, I can definitely find the true meaning of life. Because humans are so small, compared to thsoe giant starts. We do what we have to do, and burn and devote ourselves so we can lead a successful life. ( Finally, if I go to the space, I can definitely find the true meaning of life. Humans are so small, compared to those giant stars. So the problems that I think of day to day would just disappear. I would be able to think about what is really important, and what exactly I'm doing with my life and discover meaning in that way.)

以上就是小编为大家分享的托福独立口语高频话题的学生解答和资深讲师批改分析,希望能为大家带来一些独立口语回答方面的帮助。

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