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托福范文155篇中经典范文解析

2018年08月23日16:07 来源:小站整理
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摘要:正在备考的考生中,都有一个疑问,怎么去看待一篇范文,是不是要全部背诵,或者是记住一些不认识的单词就好了。今天小站君就为大家带来如何学习一篇作文范文。

一般托福写作能称为范文的,一般都是因为它在遣词造句,文章逻辑结构,中心思想等方面都有独特的造诣。如何分析一篇好的范文呢,小站君就为大家带来实例分享,要考生明白一份好的范文分析,能够提高我们自己的写作能力之外,还能加强逻辑的建设。首先,我们看一篇文章,第一步就是要数清段落,然后再根据每段开的意思,来大概总结一下段落要点。

 

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When a new piece of technological device, usually an electronic gadget, is launched, there must be long queues of people who cannot wait to own it. On the other hand, there are patient people, who wait until the market calms down. Although passion is not necessarily undesirable, patience is more adoptable.

 

这段从一个例子开始诉说一个中心思想,然后最后一句话带出耐心更需要被采用。典型的开头见山,例子清晰简单,而且很有认同感,让读者想起iPhone的发布。

 

For one thing, if a consumer could stay calm, he or she would likely have an economical deal or even a bargain. As consumer electronics are updated so frequently that the original high price of a model can hardly remain long, it is not smart to purchase a device when it is newly available and at its peak price. After the initial thrill, many early birds regret their impulse because they know that they have overpaid. It is therefore sensible to buy the device when the price drops to a reasonable level. As for the excitement of owning a new digital gear, as long as the device is new to its owner, it does not have to be the freshly available.

 

Here comes the follow-up question: for how long should a consumer wait? Usually a few months — when many people have owned it. A typical example is smart phones, whose old models are replaced with new ones annually. A consumer could wait for merely a few months and own the most recent model with a moderate expense of money, saving hundreds of dollars.

 

上面的例子的详细介绍,通过问答形式开头,能够吸引考官注意,代入感很强,让考官有兴趣去继续阅读。

 

中心句:Waiting is a rational decision also because consumers can be better-informed. Although it is exciting to chase the trend closely, those technological fashionistas can wind up feeling disappointed. When they purchase a newest model of tablet or a most cutting-edgy wearable item, they often have no idea or only a vague idea of how these products actually feel—the appearance, the tactility, the weight and the functionality. At the moment they open the box, any feature that is below their expectations can upset them. Contrarily, patience makes winners. It is particularly advantageous that ‘late arrivals’, who have probably learned the strengths and weaknesses of a device from the feedback of ‘early birds’, are well prepared for the item. Especially unsurprising by the drawbacks, those patient shoppers are less likely to be ripped off .

 

中心句依旧使用例子证明自己的观点,通过人们的购买习惯来证明消费者更具备耐心。承接下面的总结,不会一下子把思想讲完,以为是结束了。

 

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In conclusion, first, if a technological product is purchased at a supposedly lower price, it is more worth the money; second, if the decision of purchasing is based on others’ user experience as reference, it may be more reasonable. For these two reasons as the minimum, it is better to buy a technological device when the initial heat is gone than when the tide is high.

 

句法结构丰富且自然:没有过度堆砌语法结构而造成阅读困难、冗余、油腻,作为范文可以帮助学生建立正确的导向,防止一味追求复杂结构。词汇地道且自然:并没有追求长难罕见词,但大量使用了学生普遍认识但未必会用的词汇,恰如其分,没有明显的中文痕迹。

 

以上就是小站君整理的如何学习一篇范文的方法,我们不仅要学习范文的词汇使用,更需要了解作者是如何使用技巧激发考官阅读兴趣,增强文章的可读性。正在备战托福的考生,需要注意方法技巧的使用,来帮助托福写作的提升,不能死记硬背。祝愿考生八月,九月有一个好的托福成绩。

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