【小站出品】托福独立写作工作类话题范文解析分享

2016年10月18日19:39 来源：小站教育作者：小站托福编辑

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托福独立写作考试中，高频话题有教育类话题、工作类话题和年轻人类话题。地于这几类话题大家平时练习的得怎么样呢?小站教育编辑在这里为大家带来了托福独立写作工作类话题的范文及解析，希望对大家托福写作提分有帮助。

教育类题目：

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

范文(工作类)：

Everyone in the society is seeking for success in career, but what is the key factor of becoming successful? There are two choices – good networking and hardworking. Although someone tends to choose the first aspect, I definitely agree that hardworking at school should be a key factor of success. Without hardworking at school, success in the future cannot be guaranteed.

To gain success in our future career, we must have solid knowledge of the field we choose. Under this circumstance, doing hard at school is the best way to equip ourselves with background knowledge. Although sometimes we may find things we have studied at school sort of unpractical, it is basic to handle real problems at work. Take myself as an example; I studied how to interview, how to write summaries and journals and how to make comments on subjects at school. I worked very hard and in the third year, I got a chance to be an intern in China Economic Daily. During this time, I totally put my knowledge into use and handle the real journalism with only a few problems. If I did not study hard and had no knowledge of journalism, how could I handle this internship?

Another thing we can get from our hard work is the way of solving problems. During the time we studied at school, methods of learning and solving problems are also of great importance. These methods can be put into use even when we graduate, since we all have to update our knowledge and solve problems when we are at work. Again take myself as an example, when I did my internship, I had to write down a lot of details of a certain event in just a few minutes. It was really difficult, but since I had found out a method of writing fast at school, I could put down things on paper really efficiently. This method provided a lot of help.

While some one may claim that we cannot ignore the importance of networking since a good networking may offer you greater chances to gain success. Anyway, I admit that we cannot get rid of a good networking. However, if we are not studying hard and have no abilities to do things well, how can people pay attention on us or even provide us with good opportunities? Hardworking is the foundation of establishing good relationship.

All in all, hardworking should be the key factor of becoming successful. It provides us with solid background knowledge and the ability of solving problems needed for success in the future.

范文所涉及词汇讲解(工作类)

seek for success in career追求事业上的成功

the key factor of……的关键因素

good networking良好的人际关系

cannot be guaranteed无法保证

gain success获得成功

solid knowledge扎实的知识

equip…with装备

unpractical不实际的

It’s basic to…是基础

handle real problems at work处理工作中的实际问题

take…as an example以…为例

make comment on评论

get a chance to获得…机会

put…into use应用…

have knowledge of具备…知识

solve problem 解决问题

be of great importance很重要

update knowledge更新知识

in a few minutes立刻

find out a method找到方法

put down things on paper记录

offer…great chances to提供…很大的机会

get rid of避免

pay attention on sb.注意到某人

establish good relationship建立良好的关系

intern实习生

journalism 新闻业，新闻工作

under this circumstance在这种情况下

范文分析(工作类)

文章组织结构

本文总分论点间逻辑严谨，是典型的五段式论文。总观点出现在首段第三句，即作者认为在学校努力学习是成功的关键因素。随后，作者用了两个主体段和一个让步段对总观点进行了论证。第一个分论点是为了在我们未来的职业生涯中获得成功，我们必须具备所选领域的扎实的知识。第二个分论点是通过努力学习可以掌握解决问题的方法。

论点细节展开

本文的两个主体段展开完全符合托福独立写作评分要求，按照主题句+说理论证+细节举例的结构进行分论点的展开。第一个主体段的细节举例是在学校时努力学习新闻知识，学习如何采访，写总结，评论等，最终获得了在《经济日报》实习的机会。第二个主题段的细节举例是我在学校学的速记方法对我实习时快速记录某一事件的很多细节有帮助。

语言运用质量

本文词汇多样，句式多变。具体的好词好句表达，参见Language Use中的表达并进行背诵。

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