托福独立写作批改：你是否同意“Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past ” 通篇文章中多次出现语法错误，动词语态使用不当，固定短语搭配不当及使用方法不熟悉。整篇文章中有较强的中式思维表达方式，造成语句不通顺，语义不明。文章篇幅过长，老师阅读也会感到很累。建议字数控制在320字左右。
...
沪公网安备 31010602002658号
举报电话：
