托福独立口语热点话题名师批改实例讲解：students taking non-major courses...
- 2020年03月23日11:23 来源：小站整理
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Do you think that it's a waste of time for university students to take non-major courses?
I don't think it's a waste of time for a university student to take other courses outside of their major. First, I think studying another course outside their major can spark their creativity. Because the combination of different major can teach us different thinking methods, which can improve our creativity. For example, for the student who study the marketing, when they gain some knowledge in the internet. They can creative the on-line shopping model. which is the fashion in our morden society. And second thing is students can broaden their mind through the studying another course outside their major.
4 (last sentence)
1 different major————different majors
2 (run on sentences)
3 study the marketing————is studying marketing
1 I do think it's a waste…————I do not think it's a waste…
2 thinking method————method of thinking
3 when they gain some knowledge in the internet————can gain some knowledge of the internet
4 they can creative————can create
I do not think it's a waste of time for university students to take a course outside their major. First, I think studying another course outside their major can spark their creativity. The combination of different majors can teach us different methods of thinking, which can improve our creativity. For example, a student who is studying marketing can gain some knowledge of the internet. They can create an on-line shopping model, which is used in morden society.