托福独立口语热点话题名师批改实例讲解：Describe a special experience...
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Describe a special experience that has changed your life.
One special experience I have is that last summer vacation, I participated in a program to be a community sponsored teacher in a mountain area. Though life there was very tough. The time I spend there, I will never forget. From the light in the children's eye I knew that, not every one in this world could have the good condition like us to be well educated. so we should treasure what we have now to study hard and to be a useful person for the society.
3 It costs?
The time I spent thre I never forget I will never forget
改正：the time I spent there
2 light in children's eye
改正：light in children's eyes
1 To be a useful person
改正：To be a contributing member of society
One special experience that I had was last summer vacation when I participated in a program to be a teacher in a mountain area. The life style there was very tough, but I will never forget the light in the children's eyes. Seeing the children, I realized not everyone has the opportunity to receive a good education. Because of this, I realized we should treasure our opportunities and we should stuy hard and be a contributing member of society.