【托福写作备考】写作训练分析及范文（四）
- 2015年07月24日13:18 来源：小站整理
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新托福写作中我们该尽量让文章言简意赅，用词精准。根据国外学者的调查统计，一个以句号结尾的英语句子，单词的数量最好不要超过20个，否则的话，句子偏长，听话人的注意力有可能不集中，漏听一、两个单词，从而影响对整个句子的理解。以下内容中，我们就通过实例为大家分析托福写作的一些经典范文。
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer.
参考分析：
不能同意。
确实，有些时候人们在穿着不同的情况下会有不同的行为。(举例)
然而，决定行为因素还有很多，服装仅仅是其中的一个因素。(罗列几个其他的因素)
同意人们穿不同衣服的时候表现就不一样
(1)在工作中穿衣服的表现。如西装等等。
(2)在生活中穿衣服的表现。如T-SHIRT，JEANS。
(3)节日的时候，穿传统的衣服，显得对自己的传统很自豪。
参考范文：
Do clothes make a man?
I do strongly support the statement that people behave differently when they wear different clothes. In other words, different clothes influence the way people behave.
Some small examples may give some light to the point. I usually find that those who wear suits and tie behave invariably the same in general. They probably look selfconfident, genteel and intelligent, although most of them do not really have these characteristics. So, what I want to emphasize here is that clothes work as a symbol today and people wear them would act like what the clothes impersonate without being aware of it. We all have the experience that when we wear a T-shirt and jeans we feel vigorous and act like a 16-yaer-old boy.
On the other hand, we tend to wear clothes that are appropriate for the environment. When people go for a job interview, men will usually wear nice suits and tie, while women will usually wear fine lady's garments. Because people understand that "clothes make a man", and nice clothes can increase their chances of getting that job.
To take this idea further, with the help of different clothes, we can behave a way that is different from what we usual look like. For example, when a serious person who has a frustrating job takes a picnic outdoors, he will dress casually in order to remind himself that he needs to relax for this occasion. Another interesting example is that we can sometimes see from movies that a serious woman who has a formal job in an office wearing a sexy underwear and dance like a stripper at night in order to seduce her husband.
So, as we can see, people really behave differently when they wear different clothes. So why not slip into casual clothes and give yourself a break right now?
