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托福独立口语高频话题讲师批改实例分享:a day you enjoy the most...

2021年09月23日15:07 来源:小站整理
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摘要:托福独立口语中有很多高频热点话题,这些话题因为缺乏权威批改,考生可能即使练了也没从中收获有价值的经验。本文将分享托福独立口语高频话题的学生答案和资深讲师批改结果,帮助大家提升独立口语答题技巧。(搜“小站托福”公众号,回复关键词“资讯”,掌握托福最新的考试资讯及留学信息。)

考生在备考独立口语时可能练习了不少口语话题,但因为缺乏有效批改,就连自己也不知道练习到底有没有成效。下面小编就来分享一些来自托福资深讲师针对独立口语高频话题学生答案的专业批改。

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本期托福独立口语高频话题

Describe a day that you enjoy the most or is the most special to you.

学生对此话题的表述答案

I still remember the day I got my college entrance exam result. That day is very special for me, most importantly, that's because it's a good proof that allthe hard work in my high school is deserved. I have worked more than 15 hours a day in the last year of my junior high. It's very tireless and exhausted to me, but I insisted it and I finally got the good score, what's more, I think it is also means I will have a very bright future, because I can go to the best university in our country. That would give me a better chance to find a good job.

托福独立口语高频话题讲师批改实例分享:a day you enjoy the most...图2

资深讲师批改意见

语法方面出现的错误(Grammar)

1 for me————to me

2 the good score————a good score

表达部分存在的问题(Expression)

1 most importantly, that's because————more importantly, it is …

2 good proof to prove————proof

3 the hard work in my high school is deserved————the hard work in high school was rewarded

4 junior high————high school

5 tireless————tiresome

6 insisted————persevered

托福独立口语高频话题讲师批改实例分享:a day you enjoy the most...图3

此高频话题高分口语模板分享

I still remember the day I got my college entrance exam result. That day is very special to me. Most importantly, it is proof that all the work in high school was rewarded. I have worked more than 15 hours a day in the last year of high-school. It was very tiresome and exhausting to me, but I persevered and I finally got a good score. What's mroe, I think it also means that I will have a very bright future, because I can go to the best university in our country, and that will give me a better chance to find a good job.

以上就是小编为大家分享的托福独立口语高频话题的学生解答和资深讲师批改分析,希望能为大家带来一些独立口语回答方面的帮助。

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