托福独立口语高分模板和参考范文详解：对社会做出贡献

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摘要：托福考试的独立口语部分的话题涉及范围相当广泛，很多真题考生如果没有提前进行过一定准备，往往很容易被突然袭击不知道如何回答。本文将为大家带来托福独立口语热门话题的高分模板和参考范文详解，本文话题为：对社会做出贡献。

托福口语特别是独立口语的备考，考生多接触各类话题并且进行回答结构的构思训练是很有必要的。只有遭遇过大量口语话题并且积累足够经验，大家才能避免被突如其来的陌生话题偷袭。而下面小编就将为大家带来一些托福独立口语话题的高分模板和参考范文，一起来学习一下吧。

本期托福独立口语话题

It is generally agreed that the society benefits from the work of its members. Which type of contribution do you think is most valued by your society: primary school teachers, artists or nurses? Why?

托福独立口语参考范文

Even though artists and nurses are also very important, I still believe primary school teachers are most valued by our society.

First, because these teachers enjoy the highest status. They have had the largest wage increase these years and are respected by people from all walks of life since everyone needs to send their children to school for education. And people are proud to be a teacher.

Second, the contribution of these teachers cannot be replaced. As we all know, pupils are still too young to have any self-discipline and their parents are always busy with work, having no time to take care of them. So kids are in great needs of the supervision and guidance from teachers.

托福口独立语模板分析

上文中的一些语法问题：

1. salary是可数名词，故these teachers的工资，应该用复数形式;

2. 并没有all walks of people这样的表达，如果想说“来自各行各业的人”，可以说“people from all walks of life”;

3. comparatively的意思是：“相较而言”，故后面无需再加比较级

一些实用表达方式整理

1. enjoy the highest status

享有最高的社会地位

2. people from all walks of life

各行各业的人

3. pupils

除了小学生以外，这个词还有一个意思是瞳孔。

4. too young to have any self-discipline

太小以至于没有任何自律性。首选，too...to...，是太……以至于不能/没有……;其次，缺乏自律性，缺乏自控能力，请用have no self-discipline或者lack discipline来表述，请不要用：cannot control themselves。

5. be in great needs of sth.

迫切需要……。大家还可以说be in big(美式英语)/ considerable(英式英语)/ strong need of sth. 还可以说There is a great need for sth. 这里的need是名词，这表达就要比：I really need sth.或者I need sth. badly/ desperately/ urgently. 的说法地道一些，因为动词转换成了名词。