托福独立写作范文点评——Why do people go to museums?
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Topic：Why do people go to museums?
Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
参考分析：
个人偏好，或者习惯，比如喜爱历史。可以短时间内了解一个地方的历史、文化。可以看到珍贵的艺术、文化、历史、科学等收藏。著名的博物馆周边，由于游客众多，一般也会有很多其他值得参观的地方，也会有很好吃的餐馆。另外，也有些人去博物馆，没有什么特别的理由。别人都去，于是他也去了。
范文：
人们到一个新的地方，为什么首先喜欢参观当地的博物馆？
（1）人们访问博物馆，是博物馆反映了一个国家的文化和历史；
（2）访问时间比较短，访问博物馆可以最大程度了解一个地方；
（4）非常珍贵的东西，只有在博物馆才能看到。
As a tour guide for a Japanese woman in the city of Beijing three years ago, I was amazed that she would be interested in the Chinese Culture and History Museum, which even Chinese pupils does not like to visit. Museum in my eyes used to be a really boring place, which could only display items that are dull（无趣的）and motionless（静止的，不运动的）. I thought Museums were dead. Until after I traveled to some places myself did Is tart to realize the life of museums.（作者通过自己的实际经验来表达对博物馆看法的改变，这是老外喜欢看到的事实说法）
A place consists mainly of its past and present in terms of time. When you are visiting one place, the existing scenery（现实的风景）, streets and buildings give you chances to understand its present easily. But when it comes to the past of a place, things are different. With time going by, the past is always staying in the past. Sometimes with the new constructions, a place's past can even be burnt into ashes.（本段在讲述博物馆的意义，记录一个地点的过去，避免一个地方的历史由于新事物的覆盖而化为灰烬）
In most cases, museums preserve part of the original appearance of a certain place and present plenty of information in terms of objects and pictures that one cannot obtain from the present. Only when information from the present and that from the past are combined could one obtain a relatively integrate（完整的）image of the place. That is why the Japanese woman insisted that she visit the Culture and History Museum in Beijing. Like most of other cities, Skyscrapers, glass walls and the modern street scenes are all over the place in this city. The red and gray walls, the palaces and small courtyards, which were typical scenes in the past, can only be found in the vintage（古老的）photographs in the museum.
Thus, visiting museums is a very effective way to understand a place's past, therefore one can get a whole picture of a place that one visits.（文章段落清晰，表达出了去博物馆的重要性和意义，非常值得研习。）
