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托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析:luck or hard work

2020年03月19日14:50 来源:小站整理
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摘要:托福写作遭遇陌生话题缺乏思路是常见问题,容易影响考生发挥和心态。因此大家需要在备考中多接触各类作文话题了解写法思路,积累些高分范文经验提前做好准备。本文将带来托福写作难点话题的思路解析和高分范文赏析。(搜“小站托福”公众号,回复关键词“资讯”,掌握托福最新的考试资讯及留学信息。)

托福写作的题目类型很广涉及话题种类繁多,有些话题考生初看之下会有完全没思路不知道如何展开的困扰。为了避免大家直到考试当中才遭遇这种问题,下面小编就来分享托福写作各类难点题目的写作思路解析和高分满分范文,本期作文话题为:速食方式改变生活。

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托福写作难点话题一览

Does luck have anything to do with success?

“When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.” Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

写作思路展开结构分析

首先题目里的nothing to do有点太过极端了。很明显是出题者给大家挖的坑,即使同意这个观点考生也不能太过武断,要避免观点太过绝对和偏颇。所以建议大家选择的态度是不能完全同意也不能完全不同意,如果要同意立场尽量维持在“很大程度上同意”会比较好。考生可以指出luck确实存在,然后展开说可能导致人们成功的若干原因:诚实、睿智、幽默;执著;肯于做不喜欢的事情等等。

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本话题高分范文赏析

Here is a true story, a story about an African man called Cinque who slew a most terrifying beast that any one has ever seen, a lion. His siblings in the village who know about this anecdote gave him great respect and call him the big man. However, he told the truth later. "It had killed several people, even hunters among us. Everyone including me was afraid. "I was lying down with my family, when out of nowhere it appeared. "As it came for me, I picked up a big rock and I threw it. And that wasn't bravery, because any man would do the same to protect his family. "But by some miracle, you see, I hit it. I don't know how that killed it, but it did. A rock, you see, a rock. "I received the gratitude of everyone in the village. I was given respect. They treated me as if I was a prince. They gave me the finest country cloth. All these things they gave me, I took them all. But I knew I didn't deserve it, for when I threw that rock at that beast, if I missed it, I wouldn't be sitting here today trying to explain these things to you or somebody else, I'd just be dead. I'm not a big man, just a lucky one." You see, luck does exist. When it appears, mathematicians describe in such a way that something has an extremely small probability but it does happen. People often say, one has to have an opportunity to succeed. In this case, luck is the opportunity, and to some extent is an indispensable factor to achieve success.

When people say luck has nothing to do with success, I wonder it is not their intention to deny existence of luck, but to encourage. Because luck in fact is a factor that one can not and should not count on, even though we know people who have succeeded have their own luck. It is somewhere, but nobody knows where. It happens sometime, but we don't know when. By contrast, hard work is something that everyone can count on, and as is often the case, hard work might bring luck. Therefore, luck itself is of no hope, and lack of luck should not be an excuse to failure.

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以上就是小编为大家带来的托福写作难点话题思路解析和高分范文分享,希望能够给各位同学提供一些参考,帮助大家拓展写作思路,为托福写作考试做好充分准备。

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