托福写作高分必备——25个作文常见病句整理及修改建议

2016年07月11日13:46 来源：小站整理

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在托福写作考试中，很多考生会因为自己的托福写作答题中出现一些病句而使用自己的作文得不到高分。考生因此而失分真的是太可惜了。那么考生在平时考试中经常会遇到哪些病句呢?这里小编为大家整理了25个托福写作考试中常出现的错误句子以及其改进建议，希望大家在考试的时候自己的作文当中不要因为这些错误而失分。快来一起学习一下吧。

1. I am not good at maths, but English

改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

2. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children’s leisure time?

改进: Who is the proper person to plan children’s leisure time?

3.It is children who clear about their interests.

改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

4. I agree the latter idea.(漏掉介词是大家在托福写作中低分的常见病句。)

改进: I agree with the latter idea.

5. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

6. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

7. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.(语义重复也是大家在托福写作中导致低分的主要原因)

改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

8. No one knows all the things.

改进: No one knows everything.

9. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

10. Each form of shavings friends has its advantages.

改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

11. I was admitted to a Key University for which few dared to sign up.

改进: I was admitted to a Key University to which few dared to apply.

12. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

13. They will learn the bad habits.

改进: They will develop bad habits.

14. In this continued process, people make progress.

改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

15. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

16. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

17. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

18. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

19. Children should be taught disciplines in groups to avoid unnecessary lost.

改进: Children should be taught discipline in groups to avoid unnecessary loss.

20. I felt alone.

21. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

22. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

23. What’s about nonsmokers?

改进: What about nonsmokers?

24. Why not to be a non-smoker?

改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

25. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

以上25个句子就是考生在托福写作考试中经常会用错误的句子，已经给出了改进建议，希望大家在备考的时候可以注意到这些，提升自己的备考效率，在托福考试中就不会让这样有错误的句子出现在你的作文中，从而影响得分了。最后，小编预祝大家托福考试能取得理想的成绩。

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