十天搞定托福作文之详解正文布局
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在托福备考的过程中，在写作中多数人都是会花上一定时间的。在练习中对于不同类型的题目素材，都需要安排一定量的写作时间。那么，想要快速成就自己的托福写作，我们又该从哪几个方面入手，得到更高的效益呢?下面就为大家带来十天搞定托福写作之正文的布局。
正文部分每段安排：
1~3 行 主题句
4~8 行 细节论述
1~2 行 主题再现
主题句的要求：
1、要有概括性：
Eg -. When I work in daytime, other people are also working, so I can work more efficiently.
Eg +. Outside environment during daytime helps to promote efficiency in many ways.
解说： TS 一定要概括， 不要写成反例那样那么细节， 不然后面的话不好展开了。
2、避免绝对化：
Eg -. Elder people are efficient.
Eg +. Compared with many un-experienced young people, most experienced elders can work more efficiently.
解说：正例表述得体，尺度很好，有限定成分“most”，有对比说法“compared with”等。
3、避免语法和用词错误。
细节论述部分：
1、个人事例推广到一般：(图书馆有钱该买书还是买电脑)
During the last semester, all the twenty students of my class are required to resort to the British Encyclopedia to complete our final paper.
However, there was only one set in the whole library because it takes a whole shelf to hold and is too expensive to purchase more than one set. Ever since the university bought in the CD version of the British Encyclopedia, we are free to refer to the same article at the same time through different terminals.
This case is not rare, in reality, frequently many readers of the library need to refer to the same source at the sametime.
2、反例：(still 图书馆)
Paper books in the library circulate very fast. Frequently we find a good book lose its good shape within 3 months. Those seldom-borrowed books are not safe at all, in danger ofnatural erosion and worm bites.
解说：不好说电脑好存放的时候，就说书不好存放。
举反例要适可而止，不能指望全篇用反例来支撑自己的观点。
3、具体数据和引用权威：
想得4分以上必须注意， 因为4分要求说服力，5分要求appropriateexamples。
Eg.My hometown used to have one million acres of forests. The town people are shortsighted as to sell trees for $10 per piece. Trees are sold at a rate of approximately 100 thousand pieces per year, according to the data from the government.
Professor Selephant from Peking University, one of the bestuniversities in Environmental Engineering, once said, the tress in my hometown will disappear within 10 years at thisspeed of lumbering.
倒数第二段让步：
Eg.Admittedly, books do have certain advantages over computers. They are easier to carry with, lower in unit price, and more energy efficient given that computers are driven by electrical power.
However, computers have more valuable merits as an efficient, durable, manageable means for libraries of the new century. I therefore reinforce my standpoint to choose computers as my final choice for the investment.
解说：让步之后一定记得重申 anyway 我还是坚持 XXX 观点。
用书面语代替口语：
1、短语不够正式。
2、小词不够正式：常见词替换：
| 非正式 | 正式 |
| Buy | Purchase |
| Chance | Opportunity |
| Deep | Profound |
| End | Terminate |
| Help | Assistance |
| Huge | Gigantic |
| Same | Identical |
| Thank | Gratitude |
| Try | endeavor |
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