托福独立口语高频话题讲师批改实例分享：the best way to spend this money...
- 2021年09月07日11:02 来源：小站整理
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考生在备考独立口语时可能练习了不少口语话题，但因为缺乏有效批改，就连自己也不知道练习到底有没有成效。下面小编就来分享一些来自托福资深讲师针对独立口语高频话题学生答案的专业批改。
本期托福独立口语高频话题
Your friend has suddenly received a lot of money. What do you think is the best way for your friend to spend this money?
学生对此话题的表述答案
I think my friend can divide his or her money into three parts. The first part he can use to improve his quality of life. Such as buy a clothes, or buy a book that he eager to own. Or use money as a fee to travel to somewhere that he hasn't been there. And the second part he can help people around him. or establish a foundation that arose people's attention to envrionmental protection and so on. And the third part, he can use money to investment, so that his money can increase. So in this way he and environment around him can be better.
资深讲师批改意见
发音部分需注意的几个词(Pronunciation)
1 quality
2 friend
3 second
4 bettered
语法方面出现的错误(Grammar)
1 a clothes——clothes
2 buy a clothes——buying clothes
3 he eager to own——he is eager to own
4 arose people's attention——raises awareness
5 use money to investment——use the money to invest/ use the money as an investment
6 this way——these ways
7 and so on——and any other issue that's important to people
表达部分存在的问题(Expression)
1 can divide——should divide
2 use the money as a fee to travel to somewhere that he hasn't been there.——use the money to travel to a place he has not been to before.
此高频话题高分口语模板分享
If my friend suddenly received a lot of money, I would suggest he should divide it for three specific purposes. The first can be to increase his quality of life. He can buy new clothes or a book he is very eager to read. He could also use the money to travel to a place he has not been to before. The second way to use his money would be to start a foundation to raise awareness for issues that are important to the world today, such as environmental protection. The third way he should use his money is to invest in the stock market or the currency exchange. In this way, he is able to grow his money , and he will be able to use it longer and he will have more money to use. In these ways, he can improve both himself and the people around him.
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