托福独立口语热点话题名师批改实例讲解：be more responsible for children's education...
- 2020年03月30日14:57 来源：小站整理
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托福独立口语中有很多高频热点话题，这些话题大家也许自己也练过，但因为缺乏权威批改，可能即使练了考生也还是没从中收获太过有价值的经验。下面小编就来为大家分享托福独立口语高频话题的学生答案和资深讲师批改结果，帮助大家提升独立口语答题技巧。
本期托福独立口语高频话题
Who should be more responsible for children's education, schools or parents?
学生对此话题的表述答案
Although both the schools and parents should be responsible for children's educations. For me, that I think that the school should be more responsible for children's educations. First, that childrens spend a large amount of time in school, and the school's function is to teach students how to behave and teach the knowledge. And therefore, I think that children is more influenced by the schools and so school should be more responsible for teach students to educate the childrens.
资深讲师批改意见
语法方面出现的错误(Grammar)
1 educations————education
2 childrens spend————children spend
3 children is————children are
4 and therefore————Therefore
表达部分存在的问题(Expression)
1 for childrens education (delete)
2 For me, I think————I think
3 and teach the knowledge————and be knowledgable
此高频话题高分口语模板分享
Although both the schools and parents should be responsible for children's education, I think that the school should be more responsible. First, children spend a large amount of time in school, and the school's function is to teach students how to behave and be knowledgable. Therefore, I think the children are more influenced by the schools. Schools should be more responsible to educate the children.
以上就是小编为大家分享的托福独立口语高频话题的学生解答和资深讲师批改分析，希望能为大家带来一些独立口语回答方面的帮助。
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