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托福独立口语热点话题名师批改实例讲解:What to do to help elderly people...

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摘要:考生在备考独立口语时可能练习了不少口语话题,但因为缺乏有效批改,就连自己也不知道练习到底有没有成效。本文将为大家分享一些来自托福资深讲师针对独立口语高频话题学生答案的专业批改。(搜“小站托福”公众号,回复关键词“资讯”,掌握托福最新的考试资讯及留学信息。)

托福独立口语中有很多高频热点话题,这些话题大家也许自己也练过,但因为缺乏权威批改,可能即使练了考生也还是没从中收获太过有价值的经验。下面小编就来为大家分享托福独立口语高频话题的学生答案和资深讲师批改结果,帮助大家提升独立口语答题技巧。

托福独立口语热点话题名师批改实例讲解:What to do to help elderly people...图1

本期托福独立口语高频话题

What would you like to do when you work as a volunteer to help elderly people?

学生对此话题的表述答案

If I have a chance to volunteer to help old people, I will throw a party for them. Because, firstly, I think a party is a good place to show talent of old people. Many old people have great talent, some of them can sing every well, some of them can dance very well. If you hold a party for them, they will have an opportunity to show that talent. It will make them more confident and also make their life more colorful. Secondly, If I throw a party for them. They will have more chances to meet new people and make friends. Because old people are always very lonely. They really need someone to be their side and to listen to them.

托福独立口语热点话题名师批改实例讲解:What to do to help elderly people...图2

资深讲师批改意见

发音部分需注意的几个词(Pronunciation)

1 party

2 colorful

语法方面出现的错误(Grammar)

1 Because, firstly————Firstly

2 Because old people————Old people

表达部分存在的问题(Expression)

1 some of them can sing every well, some of them can dance very well.————some of them can sing or dance very well

2 are always very lonely————can get very lonely

托福独立口语热点话题名师批改实例讲解:What to do to help elderly people...图3

此高频话题高分口语模板分享

If I have a chance to volunteer to help old people, I will throw a party for them. Firstly, I think a party is a good place to show talents of old people. Many old people have great talents, some of them can sing or dance very well. If you hold a party for them, they will have a place to show their talents. It will make them more confident, and also make their life more colorful. Secondly, if I throw a party for them, they will have more chances to meet new people and make friends. Old people can get very lonely. They really need someone to be at their side and to listen to them.

以上就是小编为大家分享的托福独立口语高频话题的学生解答和资深讲师批改分析,希望能为大家带来一些独立口语回答方面的帮助。

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