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托福独立口语高频话题资深讲师批改分享:儿童教育谁的责任重?

2019年05月15日14:50 来源:小站整理
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摘要:托福独立口语中有很多高频热点话题,这些话题大家也许自己也练过,但因为缺乏权威批改,可能即使练了考生也还是没从中收获太过有价值的经验。本文将为大家分享托福独立口语高频话题的学生答案和资深讲师批改结果,帮助大家提升独立口语答题技巧。本文话题为:儿童教育谁的责任重?

考生在备考独立口语时常会遇到的一个问题是缺乏专业靠谱的权威人士来为自己批改答案。大家可能练习了不少独立口语话题,但因为缺乏有效批改,就连自己也不知道练习到底有没有成效。下面小编就来为大家分享一些来自托福资深讲师针对独立口语高频话题学生答案的专业批改。

托福独立口语高频话题资深讲师批改分享:儿童教育谁的责任重?图1

本期托福独立口语高频话题

Who should be more responsible for children's education, schools or parents?

学生对此话题的表述答案

Although both the schools and parents should be responsible for children's educations. For me, that I think that the school should be more responsible for children's educations. First, that childrens spend a large amount of time in school, and the school's function is to teach students how to behave and teach the knowledge. And therefore, I think that children is more influenced by the schools and so school should be more responsible for teach students to educate the childrens.

托福独立口语高频话题资深讲师批改分享:儿童教育谁的责任重?图2

资深讲师批改意见

语法方面出现的错误(Grammar)

1 educations————education

2 childrens spend————children spend

3 children is————children are

4 and therefore————Therefore

表达部分存在的问题(Expression)

1 for childrens education (delete)

2 For me, I think————I think

3 and teach the knowledge————and be knowledgable

托福独立口语高频话题资深讲师批改分享:儿童教育谁的责任重?图3

此高频话题高分口语模板分享

Although both the schools and parents should be responsible for children's education, I think that the school should be more responsible. First, children spend a large amount of time in school, and the school's function is to teach students how to behave and be knowledgable. Therefore, I think the children are more influenced by the schools. Schools should be more responsible to educate the children.

以上就是小编为大家分享的托福独立口语高频话题的学生解答和资深讲师批改分析,希望能为大家带来一些独立口语回答方面的帮助。

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