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托福独立写作高频话题高分思路和范文解析:低龄学生建议打工吗?

2021年10月28日14:47 来源:小站整理
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摘要:托福写作的真题类型很广涉及话题种类繁多,有些话题考生初看之下会有完全没思路不知道如何展开的困扰。为了避免大家直到考试当中才遭遇这种问题,本文将分享托福写作各类难点真题的写作思路解析和高分满分范文。(搜“小站托福”公众号,回复关键词“资讯”,掌握托福最新的考试资讯及留学信息。)

托福写作遭遇陌生话题缺乏思路是常见问题,容易影响考生发挥和心态。因此大家需要在备考中多接触各类作文话题了解写法思路,积累些高分范文经验提前做好准备。下面小编会带来托福写作难点话题的思路解析和高分范文赏析。

托福独立写作高频话题高分思路和范文解析:低龄学生建议打工吗?图1

托福写作难点话题一览

Is it advisable for a teenage student to have a part-time job?

In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea?Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.

写作思路展开结构分析

这道题目大家首先要注意审题。题目中说的是teenager而不是college students。Teenagers have jobs,这显然是一个BAD idea。Teenager,意指十几岁的孩子——16岁或者18岁以下(18岁以上就是adult了,16、7的孩子往往被称之为 young adults。雇用童工(Employing children labor)目前在很多国家是非法(illegal)的。也违反国际儿童保护条约(International Children Act )。允许雇用童工,或存在童工现象,都是一个国家落后愚昧的表现。所以大家不要说teenager打工可以锻炼自我,teenager需要的是接受教育,健康成长,也不要说teenager打工可以认识社会,teenager还不具备足够的心理承受能力(psychological endurance),过早步入社会 (early exposure to the real world),只能导致世界观、价值观(out look of world, value, etc.)的扭曲(deteriorated; distorted)。

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本话题高分范文赏析

People who oppose the idea of students taking part time jobs say that students should use their time to focus on exclusively on studying. I would argue instead that part-time jobs helps students focus on their studies, provides valuable practical experience, and allows them a feeling of success and independence that is a perfect complement to their academic pursuits.

A popular criticism of schools is that they are "ivory towers," or places where study and research are divorced from the "real world". A part-time job related to their major gives students an exciting chance to apply the theories they have learned in school. Chemistry is a notoriously abstract, boring, difficult subject. When a student takes a part-time job in a medical research lab, however, he/she might discover how important studying Chemistry is for saving people's lives. This student might then return to his/her Chemistry studies with renewed vigor. What was an abstract academic pursuit becomes a concrete and interesting goal with a real relationship to the student's life.

Part-time jobs also help students strengthen their resumes, build important contacts with companies, and familiarize them with the contemporary state of their respective fields. No matter how hard they try, Computer Science textbook publishers cannot keep up with the rapid development of new computer hardware, software, and programming languages. C.S. students who wish to maintain a competitive edge in the job market should find part-time positions where they can learn state-of-the-art techniques. After they graduate from college, they might then return to their part-time employer to look for a full-time position, or approach other employers with good references and cutting-edge work experience.

Finally, the feeling of success that comes from holding a part-time job can build students' confidence. Knowing that they can do a job well and be paid for it is an important character-building experience that many students put off for too long. Learning to manage the money that they make will be a critical part of their future lives. If they make mistakes handling their money in college, the results will probably not be disastrous, but will teach them valuable lessons that they will be sure to remember in the future, when they will be truly independent.

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以上就是小编为大家带来的托福写作难点话题思路解析和高分范文分享,希望能够给各位同学提供一些参考,帮助大家拓展写作思路,为托福写作考试做好充分准备。

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