2017年12月10日托福考试独立写作真题解析+范文分享

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2017年12月10日托福考试忆经结束了，无论你是参加这场考试的考生还是正在准备接下来的托福考试，这一期的托福考试真题对于大家的复习都是很有帮助的。这里有小站教育老师为大家带来的托福独立写作的解析及范文，分享给大家。

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2017年12月10日托福独立写作题目：

Agree or disagree?

Students do not respect teachers as much as they did in the past.

2017年12月10日托福独立写作思路：

Step 1：

审题，题目里的关键词是respect和as much as in the past;

Step 2：

同意还是不同意选一边站，选同意(当然托福独立作文只要言之有理论证充分，站哪边都是可以的，没有对错之分~)

Step 3：

列大纲，三点分论点(实在想不出三点，写两点写好也是ok的~)

分论点1：互联网兴起，知识可得性变高，老师的重要性下降;

分论点2：教育商业化，机构变多，学生选择变多，教育资源不再稀缺，导致老师地位下降;

分论点3：让步一下，但是老师的一些作用是不能取代的，比如说有些学生不能自学，需要老师监督与引导。不过尽管如此，老师的重要性确实整体上在下降，学生也越来越不尊重老师。

2017年12月10日托福独立写作范文：

(开头段：他人观点+我的观点+过渡句)

With the development of modern society, some people think that students do not behave as respectful to their teachers as in the past. They point out that it is much easier to obtain knowledge in the Internet, so teachers obviously become less important. When it comes to me, I quite agree with the argument above and firmly believe that teachers nowadays receive much less respect than teacher in the past. Here are my reasons and examples.

(主体段1：分论点1+展开句+例证)

To begin with, with the rapid development of the Internet, knowledge becomes more and more accessible. Various kinds of courses videos or e-textbooks can be found free in the Internet, thus actually leads to the decline of the importance of teachers’ existence. For example, almost all the Shanghai college students need to learn a compulsory course named Chinese Modern History. We took this course every Friday night from 6 P.M. to 8 P.M. However, most of us would choose to skip this class because the contents our teacher showed on the class was very boring. Plus, we could learn Chinese History from online videos, documentaries or history novels. Each of them contained vivid depictions or interesting stories, which made it much easier for us to remember the knowledge we should acquire. As we can see, in this case, the importance of teachers has declined due to the emergence of the Internet, which certainly would lead to students’ losing respect to their teachers.

(主体段2：分论点2+展开句+例证)

In addition, a large number of educational institutions has been appearing during the last decade. Education is constantly commercializing. Drastic competition among these educational institutions, especially among those private ones, leads to a situation that students and their parents have wider range of options while they are considering which of the institutions they are willing to choose. Thus leads to a severe drop of the scarcity of teachers and finally results in the decrease of their status. Take my hometown as an example. During my primary school years, all of my classmates behaved respectfully to our teachers in class, for there were no private educational institutions outside public school. However, when I grew up a bit and went to high school, students in my class dared do much more impolite things in our school courses, such as playing their mobile phone or whispering with their friends. The appearance of numerous private educational institutions attributed to this phenomenon. With their existence, students knew they could catch up with their peers even if they did not concentrate in class, for they could get tutoring classes after school. Therefore, the increasing accessibility of private educational resources also play an important role in the decline of teachers’ status.

(让步段：承认不足+削弱不足+例证)

Admittedly, some people would argue that teachers can perform like a moral model for young kids, especially primary school teachers. Different from those private teachers or the information on the computer, public teachers usually spend much more time with their students, which makes it easier for them to teach the kids something besides knowledge—honesty, kindness, cooperation, and so on. However, these good qualities can also be learned from children’s parents or some other elder people. Take Chinese writer ZhengYuanjie as an example. He decided not to send his son to public school but to educate him at home. Ten years passed and his son grew up to be a happy, successful man. Without the influence of teachers, the son of Mr. Zheng could also learn these good qualities from his families.

(结尾段：重述总论点+重述分论点)

In conclusion, students now indeed show less respect to their teachers compared with their past attitude. One the one hand, Internet has the ability to provide students free knowledge; on the other hand, a large number of educational institutions make the accessibility of knowledge decrease, thus can also lead to teachers’ inferior status. Although teachers can perform as a model for their students which is a merit difficult to be replaced by those two factors above, generally speaking, the status of teachers in the society is dropping gradually. All these elements finally cause students’ more negative attitude towards their teachers.

以上就是小站教育老师为大家带来的2017年12月10日托福独立写作解析及范文，希望对大家有参考作用。加外，正在备考托福的考生可以拿这些题目来练习一下，看看自己能写到什么样的水平，小站论坛托福写作免费进行批改，希望这些可以帮助到大家。