托福独立口语热点话题名师批改实例讲解：experience of asking for help
- 2020年04月01日16:53 来源：小站整理
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托福独立口语中有很多高频热点话题，这些话题大家也许自己也练过，但因为缺乏权威批改，可能即使练了考生也还是没从中收获太过有价值的经验。下面小编就来为大家分享托福独立口语高频话题的学生答案和资深讲师批改结果，帮助大家提升独立口语答题技巧。
本期托福独立口语高频话题
Describe an experience when you asked help from others.
学生对此话题的表述答案
When I was involved in a academic study program in school, I was asked to find a professor who could give us more information and resources. Unfortunately, the contact information about professor I got went a bit wrong. So when I arrive at the place, I could not find him. At that time, I saw a lady in another office was smiling at me. So I just walked in and asked if she could help. In the end, she gave all the information and resources I needed and I didn't have to search everywhere in that building for the professor.
资深讲师批改意见
语法方面出现的错误(Grammar)
1 a academic————an academic
2 give us————give me
3 about professor I got————I got about the professor
表达部分存在的问题(Expression)
1 went a bit wrong————was a bit wrong
2 so when…(too long) (delete)
3 when I arrive————when I arrived
此高频话题高分口语模板分享
When I was involved in an academic study program in school, I was asked to find a professor who could give me more information and resources. Unfortunately, the contact information I got about the professor was a bit wrong. When I arrived at the place, I could not find him. At that time, I saw a lady in another office was smiling at me, so I walked in it and asked if she could help. In the end, she gave me the information and resources I needed and I didn't have to search everywhere in that building for the professor.
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