托福口语Task1高分答案是怎么来的?对比2位考生的答案进行解析

2016年10月09日19:51 来源：小站教育作者：小站托福编辑: 参与（8）阅读（7719）

摘要：托福口语总共有6道题，其中Task1-2为独立口语，其余4道题为综合口语。这里小站教育编辑就带大家一起来看看口语Task1是如何获得高分答案的，这里有2位考生根据同一个真题做出来的答案，一看你就明白了。

托福口语Task1高分获得，我们要从它的答题结构以及论证方法方面来入手，看它是否满足口语Task1高分的要求。下面2位考生做的是同一道题，那么他们的得分怎么就不一样呢?

题目：

Talk about a game, sport or other group activity that is played in your country. Explain why you think the activity is enjoyable.

Student1：

Speaking Rubric Score: 2.5 — 3

Answer：

Basketball is one group activity ❶ and it is played in my country with high frequency among people, ❷ no matter their age, status or gender. Numerous people play basketball ❸ to relaxation and get exercise. There is at least one basketball court situated in ❹ communities in my country, and people ranging from adults to children go to play regularly. After a long day’s work, many❺ people who work in the offices choose to play basketball to momentarily get rid of their ❻ tired work. For kids, running around and chasing the one with the ball is quite exciting.

Exercise Evaluation

General Description (总体陈述印象):

考生具有一定的信息组织能力，并能够多角度回答问题，但总体信息组织松散，语汇表达单一不明确，语法存在错误，发音带有明显的中式口音。

Topic Development (话题发展): 该答案采用金字塔结构，对篮球进行多角度描述，指出篮球的受众人群不分性别年龄，从children到adults都有(who),人们打篮球的目的是得到放松和锻炼(why)，每个社区至少有一个篮球馆(where),孩子们在打篮球的时候running and chasing(what).在细节处理的时候，for kids…运用了举例的手法。但是，总体而言每个出发点的信息发散不集中，信息衔接时逻辑不连贯。

Language Use (语言运用): ❶ 句式过于简单：and it is句式过于简单;❷ 语法错误：no matter后面不单独接名词短语。表示“不管、无论”之意，往往后面接what, when, where等等;❸ 语法错误：此处to后面需要接动词，同时，and表示并列结构，其后面为get，所以，relaxation前面也需要动词;❹ 语意不明：该处笔者的意思是(每个)社区里都会有至少一个篮球场，但是，communities的表达却不恰当;❺ 表达过于简单：可以用更有难度的短语带替代people who work in the offices;❻ 语法错误：tired的意思是感到累的，不是累人的。

Delivery (语言表达): 学生的整体回答缺少语调的变化，句与句以及词与词之间缺少有效停顿。该学生在发音方面出现了较多处错误，比如frequency，their，gender，communities，regularly等，也没有注意发音时弱化，翘舌，连读，略读。

Student2：

Speaking Rubric Score: 3.5 — 4

Answer：

Well, I believe Chinese chess ❶ has a large popularity in my country. In the first place, it requires ❷ a quick mind and great patience from the player. When playing this game, both of the players need to ❸ be completely focused to figure out which moves can threaten or even take their rival's move. And the players must consider at least 3 moves ahead before they place their piece. Additionally I think ❹ its relation to Chinese ancient history is also a ❺ critical factor for Chinese people, especially senior citizens to enjoy this game. People love talking about those legendary heroic events in the ancient times, so Chinese- chess ❻ can not only offer us a delightful gaming experience, but also fill in gap in our historical knowledge.

Exercise Evaluation

General Description (总体陈述印象):

考生的发音较好，咬字清楚，回答中逻辑很有连贯性，语汇表达多样，句式丰富，信息完整。

Topic Development (话题发展):该答案采用典型的平行结构，thesis statement是选择中国象棋这一在中国受欢迎的sport进行描述，特征一该项运动需要下棋者拥有迅速的反应和足够的耐心。特征二是该项运动和中国古老的历史文明密切相关。细节处理上，When playing this game, …一句用了解释的手法论证quick mind和great patience. players must consider at least 3 moves运用了举例的手法。考生在回答时，运用well, I believe that …; in the first place; additionally I think …的句式，使整个答案层次更加分明。

Language Use (语言运用): ❶中在表达中国象棋非常受欢迎时，没有用常见的be popular,而是用名词形式，体现语汇多样性。❷准确地描述象棋需要下棋者迅速的反应力和冷静的头脑。❸中的be focused to do替换了考生常用的pay attention to doing. ❹中的its relation to 准确地表达了与…的关系。❺替换了考生常用的be important to. ❻中not only ... but also ...的句型提高了句子的层次。

Delivery (语言表达): 此学生的回答连贯性和语言的流畅性较好，很多词组的发音均有很好的发音习惯，如弱化figure out which…，at least，略读ancient history，talking about those，quick mind等;连读offer us，fill in等;卷舌great，players，before，factor for等。回答中，考生的语速均等，并且句与句、词与词之间有明显停顿，让考官听得很清楚。

通过上面的分析，大家可以清晰的看到考生是如何获得口语Task1高分的。希望这些可以帮助到大家。以上内容是小站教育名师为大家批改的同一个题目的两位学生答案。最后，小编预祝大家托福考试能取得理想的成绩。