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托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析:学校同学的影响力

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摘要:托福写作的题目类型很广涉及话题种类繁多,有些话题考生初看之下会有完全没思路不知道如何展开的困扰。为了避免大家直到考试当中才遭遇这种问题,本文为大家整理了托福写作各类难点题目的写作思路解析和高分满分范文,本期作文话题为:学校同学的影响力。

托福写作遭遇陌生话题缺乏思路是比较让人头疼的一件事,考试中如果遇到自己完全不知道怎么写的题目可能会严重影响大家的发挥和心态。因此,考生需要在写作备考中就开始多接触各类作文话题了解写法思路,多读一些高分范文提前进行铺垫。下面小编就为大家带来托福写作难点话题的思路解析和高分范文赏析。

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托福写作难点话题一览

Are classmates a more important influence than parents on a child's success in school?

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child's success in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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写作思路展开结构分析

要经过比较之后才能选择,并不能一概而论(We should not make sweeping generalizations)。以下的问题可以帮助拓展思路:孩子与谁相处的时间更长一些?(尽管相处时间越长不见得影响就更大) 孩子与谁沟通的更多一些?(很多父母缺乏与孩子进行沟通的技巧) 家长通过什么方式影响孩子?同学通过什么方式影响孩子?或者,可以使用“It depends”的策略:要看哪一方面的影响?比如:饮食习惯的影响?思考方式的影响?审美观点的影响?

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本话题高分范文赏析

It is extremely difficult, maybe even impossible, to generalize the relationships between parents and children.After all, personalities, temperaments, and values differ from person to person as does the ability to raise children.

furthermore, the relationship between parents and child changes over time, and the same is true for relationships between classmates. As a result, the question of who is a more important influence is difficult to answer, but what is undeniable is that parents should and classmates can have significant impact on a child's success in school.

Parents are responsible for raising a child, and they should instill the value of education in him. After all, a child who enjoys education and learning is more likely to do well in school. This success will open up all kinds of opportunities in his future, from studying at a reputable university to finding a good job.

Therefore, parents should take an active interest in their child's education and help him through difficult times by encouraging and motivating him. Nevertheless, parents must be careful not to force their child to success, particularly in early adolescence. Many teenagers become temporarily alienated from their parents during this period of their life, and a parent's insistence on academic excellence against the child's will could further erode their relationship and also have a negative effect on the child's schooling.

Relationships to classmates have a significant effect on a child's academic performance, because it is in their company that most of a student's learning takes place. Since it is important for children of all ages to be accepted by their peers, much of a student's life is spent trying to fit in. Ideally, students will motivate and learn from each other, but often the opposite is the case. A student who shines in the classroom can become a social outcast, because his/her classmates are jealous of his/her performance. This can then cause him/her to become less inclined to study and work hard, because acceptance by the classmates is more important to him/her than high marks.

以上就是小编为大家带来的托福写作难点话题思路解析和高分范文分享,希望能够给各位同学提供一些参考,帮助大家拓展写作思路,为托福写作考试做好充分准备。

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