托福写作10大杀手 你中招了吗
- 2018年03月21日17:00 来源：小站整理
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托福写作中有一些会“遗传”的错误，有些同学只顾着怎样用经典的句子为托福作文加分，却忽略了要打好基础，万丈高楼平地起的道理。托福写作中，在用句措辞不能保证完全正确的情况下，返璞归真来的更实际，少一些浮夸华丽的辞藻，但也不至于在托福写作中因诟病而被扣分，以下小编将为同学们整理出托福写作中需要提防的10个常见错误。
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1、托福写作杀手之用词不当
学生们写的作文里或多或少都会有一些用词不当的问题，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的错误是不能犯的。
In the show, if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly, they will get five hundreds thousand U.S. dollars as a prize.
problems应改为questions
2、托福写作杀手之拼写错误
这里的拼写错误不是指在考试时候的手误，而是本身对词汇拼写记忆的错误。
In conclusion, issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one, requiring subjective judgement, consequently, there are no easy or certain answers.
judgement应改为judgment
3、托福写作杀手之乱用大词
First of all, children can earn money from their jobs, although there isn’t too much, but they will keep their salary gingerliness.
这里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。该句子还有以下问题：
1)该作文题目是讲学生是否应该做兼职，因此children的出现就显得很莫名其妙;
2)although和but是不能连用的;
3)指代不明，they不知道是指代前面的什么;
4、托福写作杀手之表达中式
The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion, it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people, teachers are a kind of vocation.
该句的表达过于中式化。
5、表意重复
They shocked their friends, devastated their families, crushed their best friends.
前面已经提到了朋友，后面又提到朋友。
The show is so compelling but attractive.
compelling和attractive是同义词，所以这里这么写就让人不明白。
6、托福写作杀手之固定用法错误
To some extends, I agree with the author’s general assertion that if parents also have a comprehensive sense of professional knowledge.
To some extends应改为To some extent
7、托福写作杀手之例证夸张
For example, when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer, the doctor cannot tell the truth, for the truth may cause the patient’s immediate death.
虽然善意的谎言是必要的，但是其功效显然没有这么大。
8、托福写作杀手之成分多余
According to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences shows that there is an increase in the number of university students who are taking part-time jobs.
该句中的shows that是多余的成分。
9、托福写作杀手之词性混乱
However, the questions such as "Have you ever regretted marrying your husband" may be very privacy and embarrassingly.
句子中的privacy和embarrassingly应该改成private和embarrassing。
10、托福写作杀手之时态错误
托福大作文一般使用现在时态，除了拿过去事件作为例子，用过去时态。
Some people claimed that news media has enormous influence and is a detrimental creation.
claimed应该改为claim。
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