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托福写作语料库 关于高中生是否应该经历间隔年

2018年03月02日11:00 来源:小站整理
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摘要:托福写作中,托福写作话题花样繁多,考生需要积一些相关语料库,才可以在写作的过程中有条不紊,以下是小编为同学们整理的关于高中生是否应该经历间隔年的语料库分享,希望助同学们一臂之力!

托福写作部分中,出现关于高中生是否应该经历间隔年的题目,需要同学们对间隔年有一定的了解与认识,包括对间隔年相关方面的单词积累,今日小站小编将为同学们整理关于这个问题的托福写作语料库。真题如下:

Students should spend at least one year working or traveling before they go to university? Do you agree or disagree? 高中生应该在上大学之前至少工作或者旅行一年,是否认同?( 2016年3月13日)

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托福写作背景介绍

The gap year = the Grand Tour “间隔年”,也叫“壮游年”或者“断档年”。是指从前英国贵族子女的遍游欧洲大陆的教育旅行。

托福写作立场:

成长中的年轻人应该被鼓励去经历间隔年,这是最佳的方式让他们拓宽视野,性格成长,尽管我们不能忽视其潜在弊端。

间隔年的优势

① 兼职工作可以帮助年轻人积累工作经验,获得自我成就感,使他们对于社会有了更加深刻的洞察,为未来的择业打下坚实基础。

② 旅行可以开拓视野、丰富知识、结交新友,锻炼独立性,这些对于未来的发展是有利好的。

③ 工作和旅行提高了人的社会意识,丰富了人生的阅历,成熟了人的心态。

间隔年的弊端

① 很多孩子可能沉迷工作和旅行不再回归校园,如果这样,间隔年就失去了它的初衷。

② 青春期是人的求知欲望最强,也是学习能力和记忆力最强的宝贵时期,高中生不应该耽误一年的时间远离校园而去打工或是闲逛,否则,学业就会被耽误。

③ 高中生没有形成核心竞争力,很难找到工作。即使是找到,也很容易被欺骗和剥削。

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托福范文赏析:

首段

Such is human nature to explore the unknown and see the outside word,that is why a great many high school graduates are keen on traveling or working for a period of time before attending dream universities. Conflicting ideas clash in determining whether or not it is a wise idea to inspire high school leavers to experience the Grand Tour. As I see it, the merits of experiencing the gap year outshine its potential demerits.

第二段

The most important educational benefit of taking a year off before starting university life is that traveling exposes young adults to stunning places and exotic cultures. It is one thing for teenagers to read about distant countries, but it is even better to enrich the experience of the world on one’s own. What one learns by associating with strangers and absorbing diverse cultures is something he or she could never acquire in the classrooms. For example,I made many congenial friends by self-travel to Tibet after finishing my schooling. This fantastic journey not only expanded my mind but also alleviated my stress triggered by tight academic study. Feasting my eyes on the stunning landscape really sweetened my life and lifted my spirit.

第三段

Virtually, youngsters can also become the beneficiaries of working as part-timers too. By that I mean, earning a living has a key role to play in helping one accumulate relevant working experience, train one’s crisis-solving abilities and deepen one’s insight into the society, which will lay a solid foundation for one’s future career ladder. To illustrate, via embarking on part-time jobs, I knew that money doesn’t grow on trees. Then, I studied even harder when coming back to campus.

第四段

Notwithstanding all that, we can never ignore the potential downsides caused by experiencing the gap year. First, the study might be delayed. Some school graduates are too immature to draw on their gap year, so they just waste time during that period and harvest nothing. Even worse, it is highly possible that some youngsters might end up never returning to campus. However,since academic qualification is extremely indispensable to every individual,my concern might seldom happen.

尾段

In closing, my stand is that to inspire young adults to take a year off before going to college is a two-edged sword. Yet youngsters should be encouraged to challenge themselves. This is one of the best ways to mature their thoughts and chasten their characters.

托福写作语料:

1. go to university = start university life = attend university 上大学

2. earn a living = work as part-timers 谋生

3. do some sightseeing = to be well-traveled = to travel on one’s own 自己旅行

4. Such is human nature to explore the unknown 探索未知是人之本性。

5. The merits of experiencing the gap year outshine its potential demerits 经历间隔年的利大于弊。

6. to experience the gap year 体验间隔年

7. take a year off to work and travel before attending dream university 升入理想大学之前,用一年的时间去工作或旅行

8. feasting my eyes on the stunning landscape 尽情欣赏迷人景色

9. really sweetened my life and lifted my spirit 使我快乐,精神振奋

10. add spice to the dull routine of everyday life 增加枯燥生活之情趣

11. lay a solid foundation for one’s future career ladder 为未来事业打下坚实基础

12. money doesn’t grow on trees 赚钱很辛苦

13. notwithstanding all that 尽管如此

14. end up doing sth 以……为结局

15. be led astray 被引入迷途

16. Since academic qualification is extremely indispensable to every individual,my concern might seldom happen. 因为学历对于每一人都很重要,我的担忧很少会发生。

17. …… is a two-edged sword ……是一把双刃刀

18. This is one of the best ways to mature their thoughts and chasten their characters. 这是成熟他们的思想,磨练他们的性格的最佳方式之一。

以上便是小编为同学们整理出的托福写作语料库关于高中生是否应该经历间隔年的话题,希望能够帮助到同学们!

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