【托福写作范文】托福独立写作高分范文——选择一份怎样的工作
- 2015年11月13日13:50 来源：小站整理
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对于托福备考来说，想要提升自己的成绩充分的备考时间和方法是比不可少的。而对于中国考生而言，在托福写作中，所缺少的并是词汇量和句型掌握，而更多的是逻辑思维的运用和展开。那么，相信在以下一些满分范例的阅读中就会为大家带来不少的备考灵感。
托福IBT高分作文：
Choosing a job: high-paying with long working hours, or low-paying withshort working hours?
Which would you choose: a high-paying job with long hours that would give you little time with family and friends or a lower-paying job with shorter hours that would give you more time with family and friends?Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.
托福IBT高分作文分析：
在不同的阶段有不同的选择。比如：
年轻的时候 vs 成家之后
刚刚开始工作 vs 积蓄颇丰
托福IBT高分作文范文：选择一份怎样的工作
I am optimistic that through my studies and continued hard work I will be able to find a job that will provide my future family and me with financial security. We should be able to afford the necessities of life, such as a modest home, enough food to nourish us and keep us in good health, as well as education for our children.
Hopefully, I will find myself in the fortunate situation where I can decide between a high-paying job with long hours and a lower-paying job with shorter hours. I would choose the job with the lower salary and greater personal time without hesitation, because my family and friends are the most important things in my life.
Time is the greatest investment I can make into the relationships with my wife and my children. A marriage is not just a decision one makes but a promise that one keeps. In order to do so one has to be there for the other person and share moments of joy as well as times of difficulty. Nowadays, too many relationships wither away as the partners are unable to work out their problems or bond through meaningful experiences. Personal careers become too important and family time becomes a rare occurrence.The absence of one parent, due to professional career or divorce, can have a very negative effect on a child's development. The child might question his value to father or mother (depending on which one is continually absent) and develop low self-esteem. Without the presence of either or, worse, both parents, the child will be morelikely to make bad decisions as he is lacking proper guidance. And there is one point should also be mentioned, i.e.neither expensive toys nor fancy clothes can compensate for this.
Lastly, I can derive more pleasure from spending time with my friends than I ever could from driving a sports car or taking luxury vacations. The inner peace and balance that I enjoy from their company are nvaluable to me.Also, a million dollars in the bank would be worth nothing if I didn't have the time to enjoy these riches with my friends.
