托福独立口语高频话题讲师批改实例分享:When you travel next time...
- 2021年09月07日11:02 来源:小站整理
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考生在备考独立口语时可能练习了不少口语话题,但因为缺乏有效批改,就连自己也不知道练习到底有没有成效。下面小编就来分享一些来自托福资深讲师针对独立口语高频话题学生答案的专业批改。
本期托福独立口语高频话题
When you travel next time, would you like to go somewhere you have never been to before or the places you have?
学生对此话题的表述答案
Personally speaking, I prefer to travel a place I never been to. Because, as for me, I'm kind of a explorer. I'd like to try new things. You know travelling in a place you have never been to is like kind of a adventure. I will meet many new things, new people, and enjoy the beautiful sceneries I have never seen before. I think that's awesome. Besides, travelling to a new place can abroad my horizon during the whole process. You know have a better, I can learn more about local culture and custom. It's definitely would abroad my horizon.
资深讲师批改意见
发音部分需注意的几个词(Pronunciation)
1 explore
2 kind
3 better
4 before
语法方面出现的错误(Grammar)
1 travel a place——travel to a place
2 to a place I never been to——to a place I have never been before
3 a explorer——an explorer
表达部分存在的问题(Expression)
1 Because,——as for me (redundant)
2 abroad my horizon——broaden my horizons
3 culture and custom——culture and customs
此高频话题高分口语模板分享
Personally speaking, I prefer to travel to a place I have never been to before. I'm kind of an explorer. I like to try new things. Travelling to a place you have never been to is kind of adventure. I will see new money, new things, new people and enjoy beatuiful scenery I have never seen before. Besides, travelling to a new place can broaden my horizons. During the whole process, I can learn about local culture and customs.
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