托福独立口语热点话题名师批改实例讲解：the goal of college education...
- 2020年03月25日15:22 来源：小站整理
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Ensuring students a good job or improving their overall abilities, which one should be the goal of college education?
Well, I definitely think that the college education should be aimed at improving the students' overall abilities, because you know teaching a student about all the skills and the knowledge that could help them overcome all the difficulties they will meet in the rest of live. We'll just help them pave the way for success in the future career. Moreover, just getting a job after graduation doesn't garantee a long-term success in the career. For instance, high GPA and the skills in interview may just ensure the students a good job. But without all the social skills and work ability, it hard for them to be promoted to a high position.
1 overall abilities
1 the college education————college education
2 because (delete)
1 you know (delete)
2 rest of life————rest of their lives
3 the skills in interview————interviewing skills
I definitely think that college education should be aimed at improving the students' overall abilities. Teaching students about all the skills and knowledge that can help them overcome the difficulties they will need in the rest of their lives will help pave the way for the success in their future careers. Moreover, just getting a job after graduating doesn't garantee a long-term success in their career. For instance, a high GPA and interviewing skills may ensure a good job, but without all the social skills and work ability, it is hard to be promoted to a high position.