托福独立口语热点话题名师批改实例讲解：When you travel next time...
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When you travel next time, would you like to go somewhere you have never been to before or the places you have?
Personally speaking, I prefer to travel a place I never been to. Because, as for me, I'm kind of a explorer. I'd like to try new things. You know travelling in a place you have never been to is like kind of a adventure. I will meet many new things, new people, and enjoy the beautiful sceneries I have never seen before. I think that's awesome. Besides, travelling to a new place can abroad my horizon during the whole process. You know have a better, I can learn more about local culture and custom. It's definitely would abroad my horizon.
1 travel a place——travel to a place
2 to a place I never been to——to a place I have never been before
3 a explorer——an explorer
1 Because,——as for me (redundant)
2 abroad my horizon——broaden my horizons
3 culture and custom——culture and customs
Personally speaking, I prefer to travel to a place I have never been to before. I'm kind of an explorer. I like to try new things. Travelling to a place you have never been to is kind of adventure. I will see new money, new things, new people and enjoy beatuiful scenery I have never seen before. Besides, travelling to a new place can broaden my horizons. During the whole process, I can learn about local culture and customs.