托福独立口语高频话题讲师批改实例分享：play sports or watch others playing sports...
- 2021年09月07日11:02 来源：小站整理
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考生在备考独立口语时可能练习了不少口语话题，但因为缺乏有效批改，就连自己也不知道练习到底有没有成效。下面小编就来分享一些来自托福资深讲师针对独立口语高频话题学生答案的专业批改。
本期托福独立口语高频话题
Some people prefer to play sports. Other people prefer to watch others playing sports. Which do you prefer and why?
学生对此话题的表述答案
As for me, I prefer to play sports, instead of just watching them. , watching others play. Here‘s two reasons. First, I think experience is always better, and I don't get to understand the spiritual? of them. Like I'm a huge fan of basketball, and I love to play the NBA games, but you'll get these real things by experience it. Like the team spirit and team work and also provide you an opportunity to make a friend. And second is that those sports thing always makes your body healthy, fit and makes you more athletic. I think that will be good for you.
资深讲师批改意见
发音部分需注意的几个词(Pronunciation)
1 understand the spiritual?
2 spirit
3 basketball
语法方面出现的错误(Grammar)
1 here's——here are
2 And second is——Second
表达部分存在的问题(Expression)
1 As for me, I prefer——I prefer
2 you don't get to understand——you don't get to understand... if ...
3 you'll get these real things by experience it——you wouldn't get the full experience that way.
4 team spirit, teamwork, opportunity to make friends.——by playing the game, you could experience team spirit, teamwork, opportunity to make friends. 5 those sports thing——sports
此高频话题高分口语模板分享
There are two reasons why I perfer to play sports instead of just watching others play. First, I think experiences are always better than observation. You don't get to understand what the sports feel like unless you play. I am a huge fan of basketball, and I love to play the NBA games, but you will not get the full experience that way. By playing the game, you can experience team spirit, team work and opportunity to make friends. Second, sports make you body healthy and athletic. I think that will be good for you.
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