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托福口语模板及参考范文汇总之艺术和科学选课

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摘要:在托福考试中,同学们要想取得托福口语的高分,不仅仅需要练习自己口语的流利度,更要准备足够的托福口语素材以及背诵不同题材的要托福口语真题,本文将带来托福口语模板及参考范文汇总之艺术和科学选课的内容,希望能够帮助正在备考托福的同学们!

托福考试中,托福口语是其中最重要的部分之一,同学们要想取得托福口语的高分,不仅仅需要练习自己口语的流利度,更要准备足够的托福口语素材以及背诵不同题材的要托福口语真题,本文小编将为同学们带来托福口语模板及参考范文汇总之艺术和科学选课的内容,希望能够帮助正在备考托福的同学们!

托福口语模板及参考范文汇总之艺术和科学选课图1

托福口语题目:

Which class would you join for fun? Art class or science class.Please give your reasons with details.

托福口语参考范文:

Personally, I believe that science class is a better choice for me because I'm just the one who has no passion for anything about art. Most of the time, when others are appreciating a great work of art, I will just count when the class will end. Sometimes, I may even have to drink a lot of coffee before the class to prevent myself from falling asleep during the class. By contrast, in the science class, it is so interesting that I hardly feel bored. The mysterious black hole, the magical universal gravitation, and the undiscovered asteroid, all of these can spark my interest and I am overwhelmed by tons of the secrets of the cosmos.

托福口语参考答案:

Personally, I believe that science class is a better choice for me instead of [than] art class because I am the one who likes doesn’t like/ has no passion for things of art. Inthis way, Most of the time, when the others are appreciating a great aunt art work, I will just count how long will the class end the class will last/ when the class will end. Sometimes, I even may/ may even have to take some measures to prevent myself from falling sleep asleep when/ while my classmates are immersed in a passionate work of music art.

However, in the science class, it is so interesting that I can hardly be distracted by the surroundings. The mysterious black hole, the magical universal gravitation, and the undiscoverted undiscovered asteroid, all of these got my attention arouse/ spark my interest/ arouse/ spark/ awaken/ pique my curiosity. And I was overwhelmed by tons of secrets of the cosmos.

托福口语模板分析:

请不要把than和rather than相混淆。形容词比较级后边要接的是than,表示“做比较”,如果是rather than = instead of,意思是“而不是”。故可以说:I think A is better than B. 或 I would choose A rather than B. 但是不能串了,I think A is better rather than B.

口误可不行哦!既然观点是:选the science class,那必然是对艺术的事情都不感兴趣咯,所以,这里应该是一个口误(比较严重哦,障碍到了对方的理解)

In this way, 的意思是“依照这种方式,”但是,在这里没有什么方式,所以改成了Most of the time,意思是“大多数时候,”表明这是一种常态

In this way的正确用法示范:I highly recommend that you should join YEEAOO's 晨读团 because in this way, you can not only improve your English, but also make a lot of new friends.

PS: 所以你看,这就是为什么can的否定式,必须写成can't或者cannot(连在一起),因为空格之后完全是不一样的意思哦!这里不是can的否定式cannot(不能够),而是:can not only(不只是能够)!!!

the others这种说法是错误的,如果是the那就是:the other,表示是2者中的另一个(one 和 the other);要么就直接others,很多个里边的其他几个

How long后边是引导的如果是一个简单句的问句, 则will需提前

但如果how long一道的是整个句子的宾语, 那就用正常语序

这里的take some measures to prevent myself from falling asleep:

A. take some measures的说法不够具体:请问,究竟是采取什么样的措施呢?建议改为说某种具体的措施:比如,课前喝超多咖啡,课前用凉水洗脸,上课的时候把老师的脸想象成自己的idol等等~

B. fall + asleep(形容词,作表语,表示“睡着了”的状态)

when/ while my classmates are immersed in a passionate work of music art. 为了确保主谓一致,把classmate改成了classmates(后边是are)同时,因为art class实际上指的是“美术课”,所以不建议说a work of music。PS: work在当“作品”讲的时候,是可数名词哦~所以,这里加a是正确哒~

However, in the science class, it is so interesting that I can hardly be distracted by the surroundings.

A. However, 表示“转折关系”,但是,这里是表示“对比关系”,建议改为“By contrast/ In contrast,”

B. 上文说的是:美术课会让我觉得很想睡觉,很想下课——就是无聊嘛。那么,下面对比的时候,应该是说:科学课让我觉得不无聊。可是can hardly be distracted by the surroundings的意思却是让我不分心/注意力更集中。建议改为:hardly feel bored

【修改后的版本】

Personally, I believe that science class is a better choice for me because I'm just the one who has no passion for anything about art. Most of the time, when others are appreciating a great work of art, I will just count when the class will end. Sometimes, I may even have to drink a lot of coffee before the class to prevent myself from falling asleep during the class.

By contrast, in the science class, it is so interesting that I hardly feel bored. The mysterious black hole, the magical universal gravitation, and the undiscovered asteroid, all of these can spark my interest and I am overwhelmed by tons of the secrets of the cosmos.

托福口语模板分析:

请大家注意:口语答案要求我们提供【details/ examples 一定要在答案中体现细节和例子】!stellast同学在这一点上,为我们做出了相当棒的示范!她在描述science class的有趣时,引入了非常多的细节,在充分论证的同时还展示了自己所掌握的丰富词汇,可谓一箭双雕!希望大家都可以向她学习哦!

此外,她在本文中,实际上只说了1个理由:对art我根本不感兴趣,觉得无聊。然后进行了正反对比论证。这也是一种讲托福口语的方式。

在此,说一下本题的几个常见错误发音:【不要乱加r系列】

1. fun 不要发成“放”!

2. art 不要发成aunt, 要发出r的音哦!

3. science 不要发成"散s",应该是/'saɪəns/!

类似的:surroundings /sə'raʊndɪŋ/ 也不要忘记发n

4. passion /'pæʃ(ə)n/不要发成pension/'penʃ(ə)n/ 主要就是注意元音的发音,是/æ/不是/e/5. passionate 同理/'pæʃ(ə)nət/,一定要注意两个a的发音哦!

6. mysterious 不要忘记浊化s之后的t

类似的:station, stand, stunned; street, stranger, stress

7. curiosity 这个词有好几个音节,不要吞音哈~因为比较难发音,所以范本答案中,我们改成了interest~

8. overwhelmed over的v请不要忘记轻咬下唇

介绍一些值得积累的表达:

1. 【have passion for sth.】对某事怀有激情

2. 【Most of the time,】大多数时候(大多数人 = most people, a majority of people,如果说most of the people意思是“我们中的大多数”,而且,后边要加定语来修饰限制people)

E.g. Most of the people who are reading this article have already been a member of YEEAOO's 晨读团. 【Sigh..... 所以说,才想求转,给更多人看到哇!】

3. 【appreciate a work of art】 欣赏一件艺术作品

4. 【prevent sb. from doing sth.】阻止某人做某事

5. 【fall asleep】睡着

6. 【during the class】 在课上 还可以说in a/the class

7. 【hardly feel bored】从不感到无聊 (hardly 相当于一个否定词)

8. 【mysterious black hole, the magical universal gravitation, and the undiscovered asteroid】神秘的黑洞,神奇的万有引力和尚未被发现的小行星

9. 【arouse/ spark my interest; arouse/ spark/ awaken/ pique my curiosity】 激发我的兴趣/好奇心

10.【be overwhelmed by sth.】使某人感到非常惊讶

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