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2014年8月23日托福写作真题解析

  托福考试写作部分包括两道试题,需在大约50分钟的时间内完成。独立写作试题部分需30分钟的时间,需要考生根据自己的知识和经验陈述、解释并支持对待某一问题的某个看法。通常有效的回答应是一篇300个单词左右的作文。此外,考生有20分钟的时间来总结听力材料中的要点,并解释这些要点与阅读材料中的要求有何不同。

  独立写作:young people are more likely to give time and energy to improve the world than young people were in the past.

  思路点评
  如果同意这一论点,我们可以从教育条件、沟通工具、技术发展等角度展开讨论,如果不同意,可以考虑享乐主义风、与机器打交道占用时间,导致人与人的沟通减少、现在的年轻人生活压力更大等方面。大家在写作时要注意地道的表述方式,举例要具体到细节。
 

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  The world nowadays are quite different from that in the past decades, all the improvements have contributed to more and more opportunities to change the world furthermore. From my point of view, young people are more willingly to change the world, either fulfilling their dreams or turning their inspirations into reality. Also, the approaches to achieve them are more available than that in the past.
 
  First of all, the present generations can easily get access to well-prepared education from their early childhood. The continuous study has, to a large extent, explored their potentials and cultivated their ambitions to change the world. Whereas with limited educational resources, seldom of those children in the past would grasp the instant opportunities despite of less competitors and more exposure to chances.  For example, some children are taught to shoulder up their responsibilities from each and every details in their life, and are endowed with innovational spirits by playing various intellectual games. And the spirits would accompany with them all their life. Could you imagine the power along with them when these children become rational but energetic adults?
 
  What’s more, the overall social environment nowadays is more open than that in the past. Interpersonal relationships can be simply built up and profound friendships can be easily cultivated. The communicating techniques have shortened the distance among people, and exchange of ideas has contributed to all kinds of innovation, all of which would result in more possibilities for young people to change the world than those in the past. Let’s take the production of iphone for example. Without the cooperation of designers and technicians all over the world, such product can not be produced and eventually delivered to the consumers. If there are no communicating tools, such masterpiece would still not be achieved. Therefore, the change of the world nowadays is easier than that in the past, and the tendency will continue.
 
  In short, all the prerequisites accessible to youths nowadays, from the fast improving technology to the well-facilitated educational environment, have made the world change more and more quickly. And I faithfully believe that our civilization would obtain more achievement in the near future.  
 

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