【小站出品】托福独立写作工作类话题主体段写作技巧介绍

2016年10月18日15:08 来源：小站教育作者：小站托福编辑: 参与（1）阅读（4470）

摘要：托福写作考试由综合写作和独立写作2个部分组成。其中综合写作是写作学科类文章，独立写作是写作话题类文章。在托福独立写作中主体段应该如何写呢?这里小站教育编辑就带大家一起来学习一下托福独立写作主体段的写作技巧，希望对大家有帮助。

托福独立写作考试中，高频话题有教育类话题、工作类话题和年轻人类话题。托福独立写作的主体段是整个托福作文的重中之重，如何写作好将决定你的作文得分。这里小站教育编辑为大家带来了托福独立写作工作类话题主体段的写作技巧介绍，希望对大家托福写作提分有帮助。

工作类话题题目：

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

主体段1：

思路分析：

分论点：用一句简单句或主从句将分论点清晰表达。句子切忌过于复杂，同时注意需要与总观点紧密结合

说理论证：用简洁清晰的话语对分论点进行阐述解释。说理论证在分论点展开时必须出现，此为评分标准中的得分点

细节例子：用具体的例子进一步支持说理论证。细节例子亦是分论点展开时的重要步骤，评分标准中包含此得分点

主体段1范文：

❶To gain success in our future career, we must have solid knowledge of the field we choose. ❷Under this circumstance, doing hard at school is the best way to equip ourselves with background knowledge. Although sometimes we may find things we have studied at school sort of unpractical, it is basic to handle real problems at work. ❸Take myself as an example; I studied how to interview, how to write summaries and journals and how to make comments on subjects at school. I worked very hard and in the third year, I got a chance to be an intern in China Economic Daily. During this time, I totally put my knowledge into use and handle the real journalism with only a few problems. If I did not study hard and had no knowledge of journalism, how could I handle this internship?

范文解析：

1.开头句作为分论点，为了在我们未来的职业生涯中获得成功，我们必须具备所选择领域的扎实的知识。

2.接着对分论点进行说理论证，在学校好好学习是给自己储备知识的最好方式。尽管有时我们可能会发现我们在学校学的知识不实用，但这是在工作中处理实际问题所需要的基本知识。

3.最后用具体的例子进一步论证，即以自己为例，说明我在学校时努力学习新闻知识，学习如何采访，写总结，评论等，最终获得了在《经济日报》实习的机会。

主体段2：

思路分析：

分论点：用一句简单句或主从句将分论点清晰表达。句子切忌过于复杂，同时注意需要与总观点紧密结合

说理论证：用简洁清晰的话语对分论点进行阐述解释。说理论证在分论点展开时必须出现，此为评分标准中的得分点

细节例子：用具体的例子进一步支持说理论证。细节例子亦是分论点展开时的重要步骤，评分标准中包含此得分点

主体段2范文：

❶Another thing we can get from our hard work is the way of solving problems. ❷During the time we studied at school, methods of learning and solving problems are also of great importance. These methods can be put into use even when we graduate, since we all have to update our knowledge and solve problems when we are at work. ❸Again take myself as an example, when I did my internship, I had to write down a lot of details of a certain event in just a few minutes. It was really difficult, but since I had found out a method of writing fast at school, I could put down things on paper really efficiently. This method provided a lot of help.

范文解析：

1.开头句作为分论点，通过努力学习可以掌握解决问题的方法。

2.接着对分论点进行说理论证，我们在校学习期间，学习能力和解决问题的方法也是非常重要的。这种能力和方法在我们毕业后仍能用到，因为我们工作时需要不断更新知识并解决问题。

3.最后再次以自己为例，做实习生时，我需要在短时间内写下某一事件的很多细节。这真的很难，但是我在学校学过速记，这样可以有效地记录。这种方法很有帮助。