【写作必备素材】托福写作万能理由——成就感(achievement)
- 2015年08月10日14:10 来源：小站整理
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在托福写作的练习中，我们往往都会被各类题目的范文，看花了双眼。各类不同的题材和内容，让我们都很难去整理出一个细节分类。不过，细细看来就不难发现，无论内容再怎样花样繁多，都逃不出托福写作题库的范围。为了将托福写作的内容细分化，托福写作话题分为教育类、社会类、生活方式类、工作类、成功类、科技类、媒体类以及交通类等十余个分类。
首先，这里要说明一下，为什么说是“万能”理由，那是因为，咱们的托福独立写作的话题主要分成教育类、社会类、生活方式类、工作类、成功类、科技类、媒体类等十余种写作话题。
而“成就感”就和其中的“成功类”、“工作类”以及“科技类”中的大部分话题相关。也就是说，大家以后在碰到类似的写作话题时，咱们今天讲到的内容就可以在必要的时候出现了。
下面介绍一下“成就感”这个理由的使用，以及由此拓展的关键词和万能段落。
万能理由：成就感(achievement)
关键词句:a sense of achievement virtuous cycle 良性循环
grand feat/exploit 辉煌的业绩
attainment of goals elevate our self-esteem be conductive to self-actualization有助于自我实现
万能段落：By doing (something), we can enjoy a sense of achievement. The feat of accomplishing is conductive to self-actualization, which will inevitably elevate our self-esteem. Inflated esteem will proportionally contribute to even more solid achievement. This is virtuous cycle toward a better career. For example, I have a relative who works in a big company. He was once awarded the opportunity to travel abroad that excited him for quite a long time. After that he worked even harder and gained the elevated esteem.
下面是一篇和 “成就感”相关的托福写作真题：
2013年4月12日北美的一道托福写作题目：
工作类话题
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Workers would be much happier if they are doing different types of tasks during their workday than doing the same task.
参考范文：
With the sheer passage of time，the pace of work becomes faster and faster，so it is common that the boss order the workers to do several different types of jobs in one workday. Unfortunately, some employees complain that they have too much work to do.
But in my opinion，doing different types of tasks always means pleasance. The first point for my argument is that if workers are doing different types of tasks during their workday，they will reach achievement. That is, people will be proud of themselves if they are versatile. Thus if this working strategy can let employees think that "oh, I'm omnipotent."
