【托福提分】新托福写作中7个常见错误整理
- 2014年04月15日10:34 来源：小站整理
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虽说托福写作并非内地考生的难点，但是很多考生还是会犯下一些常见的错误。官方真题Official小站老师介绍说，只要我们认真备考，用心答题，很多时候是可以避开这些错误的。下面就一起来看看这些错误吧!
拼写错误
这里的拼写错误不是指在考试时候的手误，而是本身对词汇拼写记忆的错误。
In conclusion， issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one， requiring subjective judgement， consequently， there are no easy or certain answers.
judgement应改为judgment
乱用词语
First of all， children can earn money from their jobs， although there isn’t too much， but they will keep their salary gingerliness.
这里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。该句子还有以下问题：
1)该作文题目是讲学生是否应该做兼职，因此children的出现就显得很莫名其妙;
2)although和but是不能连用的;
3)指代不明，they不知道是指代前面的什么;
托福写作低分原因——用词不当
学生们写的作文里或多或少都会有一些用词不当的问题，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的错误是不能犯的。
In the show， if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly， they will get five hundreds thousand U.S. dollars as a prize.
problems应改为questions
过分中式化
The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion， it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people， teachers are a kind of vocation.
该句的表达过于中式化。
重复啰嗦
They shocked their friends， devastated their families， crushed their best friends.
前面已经提到了朋友，后面又提到朋友。
The show is so compelling but attractive.
compelling和attractive是同义词，所以这里这么写就让人不明白。
语法错误
To some extends， I agree with the author’s general assertion that if parents also have a comprehensive sense of professional knowledge.
To some extends应改为To some extent
举例不当
For example， when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer， the doctor cannot tell the truth， for the truth may cause the patient’s immediate death.
虽然善意的谎言是必要的，但是其功效显然没有这么大。
词性错误
However， the questions such as "Have you ever regretted marrying your husband" may be very privacy and embarrassingly.
句子中的privacy和embarrassingly应该改成private和embarrassing。
综上所述，以上就是我们官方真题Official小站老师介绍的几点错误，希望大家在托福考试中合理规避这些问题，也多从错误中总结教训，并养成善于总结的好习惯。
