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托福写作考试中的三大类病句详解

托福写作的评分标准比较高,在语言上的考察点也是非常高,所以新托福考试在语言上一定要引起极度重视,很多考生对于托福写作一筹莫展,那么我们怎么完成一篇优秀的文章呢?其中词汇的重要性我们必须重视,包括遣词和造句两个方面。下面小编为大家分析下三大类型的病句。

1、破碎句

所谓破碎句,就是句子不完整,通常是没有谓语(或者说谓语是动词的非谓语形式,如分词),或者是从句单独成句。

破碎句:She singing alone.(无谓语,singing是现在分词)

正确句:She is singing alone.

破碎句:He did not come. Because he was sick. (从句单独成句)

正确句:He did not come because he was sick.

2、接连句

所谓接连据,就是两个句子直接连在一起,既未使用连词,也未使用正确的标点符号。

接连句:Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time.

正确句一:Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However, they have greater freedom in planning their time.

正确句二:Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however, they have greater freedom in planning their time.

3、句子连接不正确

所谓句子连接不正确,就是两个独立的句子之间以逗号连接,这是不合英语语法的。正确的做法是以连词、分号、冒号、句号等连接两个句子。

不正确句:Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, there is no change in the composition of the chalk.

正确句:Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, so there is no change in the composition of the chalk.

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