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With the boost of mess media and programs,people today live in a circumstance full of numerous of information. Journaliststend to play an increasingly essential role in collecting, processing and broadcasting news. The question is , to what extent can we trust them?
Due to the wide variety of journalists, Itend to believe that we shouldn’t trust them all. It is not uncommon today thata great deal of magazines and TV programs present fabric news and information inorder to attract the attention of consumers and audiences. The pursuit ofprofits may lead journalists betray their responsibility of presenting reliableand objective news. Accordingly, when we audiences face such an array ofinformation, we should have the awareness to judge true or false, the abilityto tell right from wrong.
Admittedly, there are still manyjournalists who stick to their profession rules strictly. Certain common andbasic qualities are shared by them. First of all, they should present objectiveand real news rather than the fabric and misleading ones because realistically,most people in our society can be easily attracted and misled by the media.Furthermore, it is better for the journalists have the ability to analysis thenews to the public through different approaches such as critical essays on thenewspaper or comments on the website. By taking their responsibility as journalists,the public can get a better understanding of our social affairs.
Overall, as the public, we would better nottrust all the journalists. At the same time, journalist should take their responsibilityas the broadcaster of the whole society.
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With the boost of【in】 mess media and programs,people today live in a circumstance full of numerous of【冲突了，或者在numerous 后加上kinds of】 information. Journalists stend to【没有stand to do sth这一用法，建议改成 begin to】 play an increasingly essential role in collecting, processing and broadcasting news. The question is , to what extent can we trust【the information or report released by】 them?
Due to the 【existing of all sorts of journalists 】wide variety of journalists, I tend to believe that we shouldn’t trust them all. It is not uncommon today that a great deal of magazines and TV programs present fabric news【fabricated news】 and information in order to attract the attention of consumers and audiences【the public】. The pursuit of profits may lead【mislead sb to do/into doing sth】 journalists betray their【due】 responsibility of presenting reliable and objective news. Accordingly, when we audiences【the public】 face such an array of【surrounded by the pouring】 information, we should【entrust our own judgement to tell right from wrong 】 have the awareness to judge true or false, the abilityto tell right from wrong.
Admittedly, there are still many journalists who stick to their profession rules【professional spirits】 strictly. Certain common and basic qualities are shared by them. First of all, they should【前面已经说到是共同点了，应该不能再用不确定的should了】 present objective and real news rather than the fabric and misleading ones because realistically【去掉，或者建议参考due to their respect for the truth】,most people in our society can be easily attracted and misled by the media.Furthermore, it is better for the journalists【to】 have the ability to analysis the news to【for】 the public through different approaches such as critical essays on the newspaper or comments on the website. By taking their responsibility as journalists, the public can get a better understanding of our social affairs【events】.
Overall, as the public, we would better【counting on our own judgement in stead of....】 not trust all the journalists. At the same time, journalist should take their responsibility as the broadcaster【建议加上to do sth更客观公正的报道...】 of the whole society.
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点评：文意较为清晰，布局也比较明确，小地方自己还要再加工。
